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Ban on mobile phone in schools

Ban on mobile phone in schools LLKn8

Nowadays Mostly Students get mobile phone at a young age from their parents. As a resuklt Many School around the world have banned the use of Smartphones, In my opinion, this is postive development, As it is could be dangerous in the Learning, social and create hinderance in their education. Students can properly focus in their sessions without distractions. For instance, Students will urge to check the notifications or put the phone in their lap within session and teacher cannot prevent everytime for checking over messages or scrolling through irrelevant stuff. On the other Hand, This will have an Adverse effect in their academic perfermoance and also create health issues like Neck pain, Bad body posture, etc. . . Restrictions on mobile phone will improves health and social wellbeing and even their communication skills will develop.

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 their sessions without distractions. For instance
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