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The given pictures illustrate a public park when this park early intially .

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The given pictures illustrate a public park when this park early initially in 1920 and currently park. Overall, It can be clear seen that there are a few similiarities but many differences in the two layouts. A number of spectacular changes have been took place. It is clearly seen that Rose garden in the north- weastern of park and Entrance in the north of Grange park have not been changed untill today. This has been followed Rose garden and Pond for water plants in the north-eastern of this park and have been replaced cafee and Children's play area in presently time. While changes, Glasshouse in the southeastren of park have been converted into Water feature. Important change has been in the center of Grange park. To be more exact Fountain has been demolished and instead of its Rose garden has been constructed. Stage for musicians in front of Fountain has been turned into Amphitheatre for concerts and seats and rose garden in the south- western of park have been destroyed.
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early
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have been
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Rose
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and Entrance in the north of Grange
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park
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changed
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and Pond for water plants in the north-eastern of this
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has been in the center of Grange
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. To be more exact Fountain has
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Rose
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garden
has
been constructed
.

Stage for musicians in front of Fountain has
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IELTS essay The given pictures illustrate a public park when this park early intially.

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