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Back in the 1990’s there were less opportunities to go abroad and study compared to the 2000’s. I think it is studying abroad has equal number of advantages and disadvantages

Back in the 1990’s there were less opportunities to go abroad and study compared to the 2000’s. I think it is studying abroad has equal number of advantages and disadvantages 70XEA

Back in the 1990’s there were less opportunities to go abroad and study compared to the 2000’s. I think it is studying abroad has equal number of advantages and disadvantages. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of enrolling in courses outside the country with relevant examples. First of all, I believe that there are a number of opportunities for all those people who decide to enroll in colleges outside their nation. Students can go to a university which offers specialization in courses that their own country does not. There are a lot of benefits of studying overseas one of them is that it makes the young generation more independent as they can earn while studying. For example, my friend Sameer travelled to Amrecia for his masters as there were not colleges in Indai which offered the course he wanted to pursue. Second of all, with positives there are a few negatives as well. Enrolling in a institution outside your nation can be a costly and time consuming. It has an negative impact on the economy as well because some of the candidates do not return to their country after completing their course. For instance: There are a number of people who migrate and apply for permanent residence in the country they have to for studies. To conclude, it is generally true to say that it truly depends on an individual as to how they use the opportunity when they travel for studying.

Back in the Apostrophes aren't needed for decades: "1990s".1990s
1990’s
 there were Did you mean "fewer"? The noun opportunities is countable.fewer
less
 opportunities to go abroad and study compared to the Apostrophes aren't needed for decades: "2000s".2000s
2000’s
.

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think
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studying
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country
 with relevant examples.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I believe that there are a number of opportunities for all those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who decide to enroll in colleges outside their nation. Students can go to a university which offers specialization in courses that their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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country
 does not. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 benefits of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withponderconsiderreadexaminelearnthink
studying
 overseas one of them is that it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 the young generation more independent as they can earn while You use this word too often, consider replacing it withponderconsiderreadexaminelearnthink
studying
. For example
, my friend Possible spelling mistake found.Same er
Sameer
 travelled to Possible spelling mistake found.AmericaArmeniaAmnesiaAmeliaMerciaAurelia
Amrecia
 for his masters as there were not colleges in Possible spelling mistake found.IndieIndiaIndiesINDAR
Indai
 which offered the course he wanted to pursue.

Second of all, with positives there are a few negatives as well
. Enrolling in Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 institution outside your nation can be a costly and This word is normally spelled with hyphen.time-consuming
time consuming
. It has Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact on the economy as well
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 candidates do not return to their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 after completing their course.

For instance
: There are a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who migrate and apply for permanent residence in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 for studies.

To conclude
, it is generally
 true to say that it truly
 depends on an individual as to how they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 the opportunity when they travel for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withponderconsiderreadexaminelearnthink
studying
. 