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Overall, travelling and reading books have their own expectation but both of them could use for strengthening and improving our knowledge. Some people would have the opposite side of thinking to me, but in my point of view, I think if we just stay at home reading all the books is not enough, reading is just a necessary condition, combine with sufficient condition – travelling, it will make our life become better. Remember that, the more we go out to explore the world, the more successful we have gotten in our social life, physical life and even mental life

Overall
, travelling and reading books have their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 expectation This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 both of them could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 for strengthening and improving our knowledge. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
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people
 would have the opposite side of thinking to me, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in my point of view, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 if we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 stay at home reading all the books is not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
, reading is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a necessary condition, combine with sufficient condition Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
–
 travelling, it will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
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 our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 become better. Remember that, the more we go out to explore the world, the more successful we have gotten in our social You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
, physical You use this word too often, consider replacing it withheartgrowthsoulactivity
life
 and even mental Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphlife.life!life?life:life,life;
life