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Autobiography of the teacher of the secondary school

Autobiography of the teacher of the secondary school NrYnd
Muhayyo Tilavoldiyevna Doniyorova was born in Ferghana, in 1969. After successfully graduating from school in 1986 she became a student of the faculty of English philology and received an honored diploma from the Ferghana State University in 1991. She began her teaching career in the same year at the secondary school number 27 of Rishtan. Prior to continuing working again at this school, between the period of 2001-2019, she worked at an Industrial college as a teacher of English. As a participant of the Regional Peer Mentors project, she intends to become a professional educator equipped with the innovative, effective, and the most modern strategies and tactics of schooling.
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Muhayyo
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Tilavoldiyevna
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Doniyorova
was born
in
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Ferghana
, in 1969. After
successfully
graduating from school in 1986 she became a student of the faculty of English philology and received an honored diploma from the
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Ferghana
State University in 1991. She began her teaching career in the same year at the secondary school number 27 of
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Rishtan
. Prior to continuing working again at this school, between the period of 2001-2019, she worked at an Industrial college as a teacher of English. As a participant of the Regional Peer Mentors project, she intends to become a professional educator equipped with the innovative, effective, and the most modern strategies and tactics of schooling.
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IELTS essay Autobiography of the teacher of the secondary school

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  American English
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