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A English speaking country you know

A English speaking country you know 15Dy7
My favourite English speaking country is The United states. The United states is a great power and a famous country in the world. The USA is a country in North America and has its capital is Washington D. C. America is the country with the large population in the world, and there are 50 states in this country. The biggest city in the USA is New York city, it is a famous city and has many interesting tourist attractions. The USA has many exciting places for tourists to visit like: Disneyland, statue of liberty, grand canyon nation park, hanuama bay, . . , so I think America is a good destination for visitors
My
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favourite
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English speaking
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country
is The
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United states
. The
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United states
is a great power and a
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famous
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country
in the world. The USA is a
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country
in North America and has its capital is Washington D. C. America is the
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country
with the large population in the world, and there are 50 states in this
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country
.
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The
biggest city in the USA is
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New York city
, it is a
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famous
city and has
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many
interesting tourist attractions.
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The
USA has
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many
exciting places for tourists to visit like: Disneyland,
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statue of liberty
,
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grand canyon
nation park,
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hanuama
bay
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, .
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.
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,
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so
I
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think
America is a
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good
destination for visitors

IELTS essay A English speaking country you know

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
112 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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