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Attractions popularity in UK

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London has been one of the most popular tourist spot for consequently many years. Thus there are some spot which most chosen by external and internal visitors. Table demonstrate which place chosen more often by visitors in relation with overall amount of paid-admission. It also highlight the change rate in context of comparison years of 1999 and 2000. Millennium Dome take the 1st place with 6. 5 million $ return. London eyes follows with 3. 3 m $. In addition to this Dome and London eye have been established in 2000. Museums and towers plays crucial roles given the data of rest of the table. In spite of Madame Tussads place in 4th Tower of London and Alton Tower follows. Considering first 5 place Alton Tower has enormous popularity despite the fact that location outside of London. The table also shows spots outside of London mostly saves its popularity with concepts of entertainment such as legoland in windsor, theme park in brighton. Despite the fact that the lack of visitors cause less income vastly for so many places with exception of London museum, Flamingo land. We might say both places conserve its charm and show increase of visitors by in order to %7 and %10. Undoubtedly we can't interpret optimistically others situation.
London has been one of the most popular tourist spot for
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Thus
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some
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spot
which most chosen by external and internal
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visitors
. Table demonstrate which
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place
chosen more
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often
by
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visitors
in relation with
overall
amount of paid-admission. It
also
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highlight
the
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change
rate in context of comparison years of 1999 and 2000. Millennium Dome take the 1st
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place
with 6. 5 million $ return. London eyes follows with 3. 3 m $.
In addition
to this Dome and
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London eye
have
been established
in 2000. Museums and towers plays crucial roles
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given
the data of rest of the table.
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In spite of
Madame
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Tussads
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place
in 4th Tower of London and Alton Tower follows. Considering
first
5
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place
Alton Tower has enormous popularity despite the fact that location outside of London. The table
also
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shows
spots outside of London
mostly
saves its popularity with concepts of entertainment such as
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legoland
in
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windsor
, theme park in
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brighton
. Despite the fact that the lack of
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visitors
cause less income
vastly
for
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so
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many
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places
with
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exception of
London museum, Flamingo land. We might say both
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places
conserve its charm and
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show
increase of
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visitors
by in order to %7 and %10.
Undoubtedly
we can't interpret
optimistically
others situation.
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IELTS essay Attractions popularity in UK

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