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Athletes have the importan role for the games of sport

Athletes have the importan role for the games of sport 2RGXJ

job is only have a short time athletes have the important role for the games of sport for the country Initially, there are a lot of job in our society, rather than praise to much on the athletes, society think it is more important to support more impactful job. This is because, Athletes works does not directly impacting the society for a better, while there are a lot of other works that have direct benefit to the people that need to more appreciated. For example, teacher salary in some remote area in Indonesia, show a very low number which cannot even able for fulfil their daily needs, a survey from University of Gadjah mada shows that 65% of non-contract teacher stood below the poor level. Although it is important to increase the teacher salary than the athletes, their also give a good role model for a healthy living style that should be appreciated.

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