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At the present moment there are many casualties due to the many cars on the streets.

At the present moment there are many casualties due to the many cars on the streets. As a consequence some people have given advice that the drivers should give a test regularly all over their lives than a single test sistem. This essay below will disgust the profits and drawbacks of frequent test for car owners. To begin with there are more advantages to take a regular driving test from drivers. First and foremost, this test is very useful for older drivers because they could forgot the rules. Another benefits would be that the drivers who don't drive regularly it is good for them not only keep drivers up to date with road rules but also raises driving standards. Apart from this to take frequent test may prevent young people from driving too fast. Last but not least it may reduce the amount of accident on the roads. Besides that tere are also disadvantages to take test every day. For example it would be minis for budget of drivers, because the organizations take extra money for it along with no everybody can afford to pay for this. Secondly drivers who have started to learn driving they have to wait longer for the test. Sometimes it may not be possible to include a written test every time. . In conclusion the from my opinion the repeating driving test will be useful for any drivers but it would be difficult fo budget of family and government organize it frequently.
At the present moment there are
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casualties due to the
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cars on the streets. As a consequence
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some
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people
have
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given
advice that the
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drivers
should give a
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test
regularly
all over their
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lives
than a single
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test
sistem. This essay below will disgust the profits and drawbacks of frequent
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test
for car owners.

To
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begin
with there are more advantages to take a regular
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driving
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test
from
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drivers
.
First
and foremost, this
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test
is
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very
useful for older
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drivers
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because
they could forgot the
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rules
. Another benefits would be that the
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drivers
who don't drive
regularly
it is
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good
for them not
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only
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keep
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drivers
up to date with road
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rules
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also
raises
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driving
standards. Apart from this to take frequent
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test
may
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prevent
young
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people
from
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driving
too
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fast
. Last
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but
not least it may
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reduce
the amount of accident on the roads.

Besides
that tere are
also
disadvantages to take
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test
every day.
For example
it would be minis for budget of
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drivers
,
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because
the organizations take extra money for it along with no everybody can afford to pay for this.
Secondly
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drivers
who have
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started
to learn
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driving
they
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have to
wait longer for the
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test
.

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Sometimes
it may not be possible to include a written
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test
every time. .

In conclusion
the from my opinion the repeating
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driving
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test
will be useful for any
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drivers
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but
it would be difficult fo budget of family and
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government
organize it
frequently
.
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IELTS essay At the present moment there are many casualties due to the many cars on the streets.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
247 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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