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At present, a lot of countries around the world are mislay they are civilizations because of internet. Do you agree or disagree?

At present, a lot of countries around the world are mislay they are civilizations because of internet. 7PR8X
At the moment, many countries across the globe are mislay they are civilizations because of internet. I partly agree with this statement. Iam going to discuss positive and negative sides of the issue. First and foremost, internet is widely developed in almost all countries. People are getting a lot of information and various pictures. To illustrate, more between younger people which is they are used to YouTube, Telegram, Instagram, and other internet use be observed. As a result, they are different to pictures and they are interested things and loosing their cultural identity. In addition, more and more girls interested in Internet and they are clothing similarly foreign girls rather than their national dresses. Secondly, more people are use different internet field and they are see a performance various videos on the internet their free time. They are not waste time because be in vain as people see Internet and internet field. So people are use internet and their have an influence body. Cultural identity people more and more take into considration. In addition, use carefully internet field and few use instagram, YouTube. On tge other hand, all people are not use internet and they are cultural identity take into consideration. This way always well result. To be more precise, all people saved their cultural civilization and always take into consideration. In addition, cannot use all internet field this way have an influence thier body.
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they are civilizations
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to YouTube, Telegram, Instagram, and other internet
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, they are
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pictures and
they
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cultural
identity.
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, more and more girls interested in
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Internet and
they are clothing
similarly
foreign girls
rather
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, more
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field and
they are
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internet and
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people
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civilization and always take into consideration.
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, cannot
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all internet
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IELTS essay At present, a lot of countries around the world are mislay they are civilizations because of internet.

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235 words
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