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Ask your landlord to pay the rent late

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Dear Mr. Jones, Hope you're doing well I am writing this letter to ask you to accept if I pay my rent a little late this month Actually, I had a lot of financial problems this month. My wife went a surgery in a hospital. She spent 3 days there and it charged me a huge amount of money. Furthermore, I paid another payment for insurance installments of my daughter. Also, I had a payment to enroll my little song in a kindergarten. All above reasons made I could not pay your rate in due date. I will be highly appreciated if you accept to get your rent over next month. Thanks in advance for your kind cooperation
Dear Mr. Jones,

Hope you're doing well

I am writing this letter to ask you to accept if I pay my rent a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
late this month

Actually, I had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
financial problems this month. My wife went a surgery in a hospital.

She spent 3 days there and it charged me a huge amount of money.
Furthermore
, I paid another payment for insurance installments of my daughter.
Also
, I had a payment to enroll my
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
little
song in a kindergarten.

All above reasons made I could not pay your rate in due date.

I will be
highly
appreciated if you accept to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
your rent over
next
month.

Thanks in advance for your kind cooperation
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IELTS essay Ask your landlord to pay the rent late

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
117 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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