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As transportation and accommodation problem is increasing in many large cities,some governments encourage the businesses to move from cities to rural areas.the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

• It has been universally acknowleged that the knot of transportation and accommodation in big metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day. some authorities stimulates the businesses to move from cities to country side. In my perspective, the merits of this development outweigh the demerits • To begin with, there are myraid advantages of this trend. firstly, this practice enhance the employment opportunities in rural areas, because of this, folks will able to provide the food and shelter to thier near and dears. To exemplify, in China, officials fosters the businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Therefore, the unemployment rate in China declined sharply. Apart from this, people can learn the many valuable skills because of this practice and it will lead to their career growth • In addition to this, individuals will easily find the public transportation. people will get the relief from hustle and bustle of city life. as a result, they do not face any difficulty in finding the accommodation and transportation in cities. To illustrate, officals who implemented this practice in thier nation provide a sigh of relief to their citizens However, knot associated with this development cannot be overlooked. first of all, only businesses are not responsible for enhancing the transportation and accommodation problem in cities. there are also other factors which contributing this problem such as overpopulation and less public amenities bestowed by the government. In conclusion, although this trend has more benefits, the demerits of this development cannot be neglected. unless government will not expand their basic amenities, the problem will not eradicate

• It has been universally
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acknowleged
 that the knot of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
 and accommodation in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 metropolitan centers is mushrooming day by day. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Some
some
 authorities You should probably use “stimulate”.stimulate
stimulates
 the businesses to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
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cities
 to This word is normally spelled as one.countryside
country side
. In my perspective, the merits of this development outweigh the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.demerits.demerits!demerits?demerits:demerits,demerits;
demerits


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begin
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myraid
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firstly
, this practice enhance the employment opportunities in rural areas, because of this
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thier
 near and dears. To exemplify, in China, officials fosters the businesses to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
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cities
 to rural areas. Therefore
, the unemployment rate in China declined sharply
. Apart from this, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 can learn the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 valuable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
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practice and
 it will lead to their career Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.growth.growth!growth?growth:growth,growth;
growth


• In addition
 to this, individuals will easily
 find the public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.People
people
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the relief from hustle and bustle of city life. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.As
as
 a result, they do not face any difficulty in finding the accommodation and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
 in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
. To illustrate, Possible spelling mistake found.officials
officals
 who implemented this practice in Possible spelling mistake found.theirheartierThaithiefshear
thier
 nation provide a sigh of relief to their citizens

However
, knot associated with this development cannot be overlooked
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.First
first
 of all, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 businesses are not responsible for enhancing the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransittransportshipmentshipping
transportation
 and accommodation problem in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.There
there
 are also
 other factors which contributing this problem such as overpopulation and less public amenities bestowed by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
.

In conclusion
, although this trend has more benefits, the demerits of this development cannot be neglected
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Unless
unless
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 will not expand their basic amenities, the problem will not Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.eradicate.eradicate!eradicate?eradicate:eradicate,eradicate;
eradicate