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As Technology is advancing, some people think that soon there would be no role of teachers. Do you agree or disagree?

As Technology is advancing, some people think that soon there would be no role of teachers. wBOml
In this contemporary epoch technology is changing at a rapid pace and has replaced manpower with machines. Some people believe that the teaching methodology will be swapped by the technology like it did in other sectors like automobile and manufacturing. I do not agree with the notion that this is not going to happen any time soon in the future. There is no doubt that the output and efficiency of technology for repeated tasks is far more superior than that of humans, but when it comes to teaching which needs supervision and attention, machines are way inferior to humans and this development will take several decades. Students learn things from their parents in their early childhood and they are not habitual to learn through robots or pre-defined programs. So, it will become very difficult for them to adopt the new changes. As a result, their parents will not agree to teach them using new techniques. However, a teacher can predict the learning capabilities of each student in a class and based on that he can give extra effort to weaker students so, that they also grow well with other students. Moreover, a teacher also teaches moral and ethical values which lay the foundation to become a good human in addition to a good student. Apart from that, artificial intelligence is not much advance which can help to motivate and build the confidence in a difficult times of the student. Therefore, an instructor will be needed to who can help to make the overall development of the child. In the end to conclude, I strongly reaffirm that to fill the shoes of the teacher there is lot of improvement needs to be done in technology, which is not going to happen very early and students will be continuing their studies will help of teacher
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believe that the teaching methodology will
be swapped
by the
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technology
like it did in other sectors like automobile and manufacturing. I do not
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agree
with the notion that this is not going to happen any time
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soon
in the future.

There is no doubt that the output and efficiency of
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technology
for repeated tasks is far
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more superior than
that of humans,
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when it
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to teaching which needs supervision and attention, machines are way inferior to humans and this development will take several decades.
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Students
learn things from their parents in their early
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childhood and
they are not habitual to learn through robots or
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pre-defined
programs.
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, it will become
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very
difficult for them to adopt the new
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changes
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, their parents will not
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agree
to teach them using new techniques.

However
, a
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teacher
can predict the learning capabilities of each
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student
in a
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class
and based on that he can give extra effort to weaker
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students
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so
, that they
also
grow well with other
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students
.
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, a
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teacher
also
teaches moral and ethical values which lay the foundation to become a
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good
human
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to a
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good
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student
. Apart from that, artificial intelligence is not much advance which can
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help
to motivate and build the confidence in a difficult
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times
of the
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student
.
Therefore
, an instructor will
be needed
to who can
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help
to
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make
the
overall
development of the child.

In the
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to conclude
, I
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reaffirm that to
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fill the shoes of
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teacher
there is
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lot of
improvement needs to
be done
in
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technology
, which is not going to happen
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very
early and
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students
will be continuing their studies will
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help
of
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teacher
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IELTS essay As Technology is advancing, some people think that soon there would be no role of teachers.

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