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As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beingss in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction.

Technology dominates the human life today. It has been inter woven in our daily life. In this technological era masses have provided artificial body parts, due to that mortality has been decreased. on the contrary the majority of society have been terrifying by this concept. My major opinion is to disagree side. However, my opinion justified further before coming to the conclusion. This para shed a some light on my view point on this idea. By providing self-made organs to the society can help to save life. For instance, clone parts are bind with soldiers who have injured may sometimes give the reason to live. Moreover, even though, a number of children with born fault or some genetic issues, can play games and do activities like ordinary children. Furthermore, cloning is nothing more than a combination of biology and technology. Although it is not real part of body, it can work the same due to sensors. It may reduce the unemployment, too. Even, some artificial parts can more reliable than the original one. The Best example of this is factory worker. By clone, they can lift more weight than others can. Since they have duplicate part they do not feel paint there. However, I would not ignore the other side. As every positivity brigs some negativity, it also has a dark side. Doctors do experiments on their patients. To earn money and fame doctors have been doing research and experiments on human, though it may put human in dilemma. In nutshell, To en link artificial part is not detrimental to us, and we should be not afraid of this. on the contrary we should take some effective steps and should aware of the experimenter of society. As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare-parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction.
Technology dominates the
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life
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today
. It has been
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woven in our daily life. In this technological era masses have provided artificial body
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parts
, due to that mortality has
been decreased
.
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on
the contrary the majority of society have been terrifying by this concept. My major opinion is to disagree side.
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further
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light on my view point on this
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idea
. By providing self-made organs to the society can
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help
to save life.
For instance
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parts
are bind with soldiers who have injured may
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sometimes
give the reason to
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live
.
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,
even though
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genetic issues, can play games and do activities like ordinary children.

Furthermore
, cloning is nothing more than a combination of biology and technology. Although it is not real
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part
of body, it can work the same due to sensors. It may
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reduce
the unemployment, too. Even,
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some
artificial
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parts
can more reliable than the original one. The Best example of this is factory worker. By clone, they can lift more weight than others can.
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they have duplicate
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they do not feel paint there.

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ignore
the other side. As every positivity brigs
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negativity, it
also
has a dark side. Doctors do experiments on their patients. To earn money and fame doctors have been doing research and experiments on
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human
, though it may put
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human
in dilemma.

In nutshell, To en link artificial
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part
is not detrimental to us, and we should be not afraid of this.
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on
the contrary we should take
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some
effective steps and should aware of the experimenter of society.

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people
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live
longer and longer, the
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idea
of cloning
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human
beings in order to provide spare-parts is becoming a reality. The
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idea
horrifies most
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yet
it is no longer mere science fiction.
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IELTS essay As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beingss in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction.

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
320 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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