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as most people spend a majority of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being .what factors contribute to job satisfaction

in the beginning, it is considered to mention the eye-catching decrease in job satisfaction due to personal financial issues or major problems in workplace such as overstressed environment. as long as job satisfaction is every worker's right, it should not get ignored. but what is job satisfaction? it relates to an agreeable job situation which directly has an impact on work quality. every company's first aim is to satisfy their workers with different elements so the final product of the company will be more impressing. job satisfaction is divided into three main parts; acceptable payment and yearly raise in position, friendly workplace with peaceful connections, reliable support from managers. these three useful tips need discipline and carefulness that every manager has to provide for each worker it needs to be considered as an undeniable duty. even though many employers still have their own complaints of negligence in company that made them unsatisfied. however, the employer's first responsibility is to stay loyal to their company and reduce their unrealistic demands. mutual satisfaction in the workplace is the key to success. mainly, factors of job satisfaction have been mentioned, even though regardless of the company's situation, another element is personal desire and passion. it means how much the worker enjoys his or her job based on their favorite subject to work on. in conclusion, job satisfaction plays a fetal role in society. the more satisfied the workers are, the more passionately they will work and try to develop their country. and finally, the action of hardworking only to see your workers satisfaction, is the only way to improvement.
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is considered
to mention the eye-catching decrease in
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job
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due to personal financial issues or major problems in workplace such as
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overstressed
environment.
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as
long as
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job
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satisfaction
is every worker's right, it should not
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get
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ignored
.
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but
what is
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job
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satisfaction
?
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it
relates to an agreeable
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job
situation which
directly
has an impact on work quality.
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every
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company
's
first
aim is to satisfy their
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workers
with
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different
elements
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so
the final product of the
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company
will be more impressing.
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job
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satisfaction
is divided
into three main parts; acceptable payment and yearly raise in position, friendly workplace with peaceful connections, reliable support from managers.
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these
three useful tips need discipline and carefulness that every manager
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has to
provide for each
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worker
it needs to
be considered
as an undeniable duty.
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even
though
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many
employers
still
have their
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own
complaints of negligence in
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company
that made them unsatisfied.
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however
, the employer's
first
responsibility is to stay loyal to their
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company
and
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reduce
their unrealistic demands.
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mutual
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satisfaction
in the workplace is the key to success.
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mainly
, factors of
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job
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have
been mentioned
,
even though
regardless of the
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company
's situation, another element is personal desire and passion.
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it
means how much the
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worker
enjoys
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his or her
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job
based on their favorite subject to work on.
in conclusion
,
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job
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satisfaction
plays a fetal role in society.
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the
more satisfied the
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workers
are, the more
passionately
they will work and try to develop their country.
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and
finally
, the action of hardworking
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only
to
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see
your
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workers
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, is the
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only
way to improvement.
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IELTS essay as most people spend a majority of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being. what factors contribute to job satisfaction

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  American English
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266 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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