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As Earth runs out of natural resources we have started to look to space for solutions However some people argue that this is the wrong thing to do and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on Earth To what extent do you agree with them Wha v.2

As Earth runs out of natural resources we have started to look to space for solutions However some people argue that this is the wrong thing to do and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on Earth 2
Earth natural resources are running out and, with the increase of population, there is no doubt that they will soon be entirely depleted. Scientists explain that unless more resources are found soon, the human race will face some insurmountable challenges. However, I believe that looking to space for a solution is the wrong answer. Take fossil fuel as an example. This resource is running out and some scientists believe we could found a suitable replacement into space. They think we might found similar resources on some earth' s nearest planet, like Mars or Venus. other suggest collecting this material causing little asteroids to explode, which are full of this kind of substance. But, is this a suitable solution? Although at first glance this might seems a suitable solution, however, is not. First of all, space travels are extremely expensive and facing this kind of solution may not be cost-effective. Second, there is the economic impact would have in countries where the exports of fossil fuels are the main source of income, the short-term impact would be devastating. And as third, we are sure we want to increase the pollution on our planet? In my opinion, the best solution is to be able to allocate funds to carry forward the idea of developing renewable energy all around the globe. Replacing old factory machinery with new ones who create less pollution. Gradually replace plastic and other materials that are difficult to recycle, thus creating less waste. But above all, to reforest areas such as Amazonia because trees are perhaps the largest ecological " machine" of the entire planet. In conclusion, looking to space for the answer is not the right answer. We need to be able to save our planet here and now. Start taking action and demonstrate that we care about our future, we have only one earth and even if there is the idea of terraforming a new planet this can' t be a solution. Because if we destroying our planet now who can prove that in the future the human race will not do the same with the new one?
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, the human race will face
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insurmountable challenges.
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, I believe that looking to
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space
for a
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solution
is the
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wrong
answer.

Take fossil fuel as an example. This
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resource
is running out and
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some
scientists believe we could
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found
a suitable replacement into
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space
. They
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found
similar resources on
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some
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planet
, like Mars or Venus.
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suggest collecting this material causing
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little
asteroids to explode, which are full of this kind of substance.
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, is this a suitable solution?

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first
glance this might seems a suitable
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, is not.
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First of all
,
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travels are
extremely
expensive and facing this kind of
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solution
may not
be cost
-effective. Second, there is the economic impact would have in countries where the exports of fossil fuels are the main source of income, the short-term impact would be devastating. And as third, we are sure we want to increase the pollution on our
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planet
? In my opinion, the best
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solution
is to be able to allocate funds to carry forward the
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idea
of developing renewable energy all around the globe. Replacing
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old
factory machinery with new ones who create less pollution.
Gradually
replace plastic and other materials that are difficult to recycle,
thus
creating less waste.
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But
above all
, to reforest areas such as
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Amazonia
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because
trees are perhaps the largest ecological
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; of the entire planet.

In conclusion
, looking to
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planet
here and
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.
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taking action and demonstrate that we care about our future, we have
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only
one earth and even if there is the
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of
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terraforming
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this
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solution
.
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who can prove that in the future the human race will not do the same with the new one?
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
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11Mistakes
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IELTS essay As Earth runs out of natural resources we have started to look to space for solutions However some people argue that this is the wrong thing to do and instead we should look for alternative solutions here on Earth 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
351 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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