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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time?
To what extend do you agree or disagree.

Although I have been using translators which have various functions such as voice recognition when I don’t remember an exact meaning of words, as the sentence gets longer, they become impossible to translate. If translators more correctly and readily in grammar and meaning, they cannot be surpassed by human. From these perspectives, I discuss this theme still more deeply in this essay. 
First, I want to take new words and buzzwords as examples in Japan. For instance, they are “insta-bae” and many other words. They were created and used by teenagers. That’s why translators don’t know how to translate and when to use them.
Although I have been using translators which have various functions such as voice recognition when I don’t remember an exact meaning of words, as the sentence
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
longer, they become impossible to translate. If translators more
correctly
and
readily
in grammar and meaning, they cannot
be surpassed
by human. From these perspectives, I discuss this theme
still
more
deeply
in this essay. 

First
, I want to take new words and buzzwords as examples in Japan.
For instance
, they are “
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insta-bae
” and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
other words. They
were created
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
by
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
. That’s why translators don’t know how to translate and when to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
them.
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IELTS essay As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
104 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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