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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom

Nowadays, technology is developing in many countries. Computer is on of the common technology which has been used in different environment such as teaching, hospital and shopping. Especially, schools are being used computer more common in education rather than the role of teach in class room. However, using computer or classroom teach always advantages and disadvantage in education. Firstly, using computer is one of the convenient way teaching such as watching video, do research and see beautiful places in different country. The most useful computer in education is helping student doing research quickly. Additionally, They are easy to search whatever they need for their studying.
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countries. Computer is on of the common technology which has been
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in
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computer more common in education
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However
, using computer or classroom teach always advantages and disadvantage in education.
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, using computer is one of the convenient way teaching such as watching video, do research and
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see
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places in
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country. The most useful computer in education is helping student doing research
quickly
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, They are easy to search whatever they need for their studying.
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IELTS essay As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom

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