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As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion. v.3

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. v. 3 NBw0
NOW A DAYS IN THIS GENERATION, TECHNOLOGY IS HIGHLY IN-DEMAND IN ALL ASPECT IN OUR LIVES, INCLUDING EDUCATION, A NUMBERS OF PEOPLE SAYS THAT TEACHER WILL BE REPLACED BY COMPUTER IN THE NEXT ERA. HOWEVER, THERE ARE NUMEROUS ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF USING TECHNOLOGY REGARDING ON HOW STUDENTS LEARN. FIRSTLY, THE ADVANTAGE OF USING COMPUTER IN LEARNING IS, IT IS EXTREMELY CONVENIENT ESPECIALLY TO THOSE PUPILS WHO HAVE DISABILITY SUCH AS SPEAKING OR WALKING, IT IS EASY FOR THEM DUE TO THE FACT THAT THEY CAN STUDY IN-HOME USING COMPUTER, INSTEAD OF GOING TO SCHOOL. THE SECOND REASON IS, IT IS MUCH AFFORDABLE DUE TO THE FACT THAT PARENTS CAN NOT PAY THEIR TUITION ANYMORE IF THEY WILL STUDY AT HOME. ON THE CONTRARY, USING TECHNOLOGY IN LEARNING CAN BE MORE DIFFICULT TO LEARN, OWING THE FACT THAT WE KNOW THAT TEACHER IS ONLY HAVE THE ABILITY AND THE KNOWLEDGE TO TEACH OUR CHILDREN THAT COMPUTER CANNOT ACQUIRE, FOR INSTANCE ONLY TEACHER CAN SHOWS OR IMMERGE THE STUDENTS HIDING SKILLS, THEY ALSO TEACH PUPILS ON HOW TO SOCIALIZE, OR HOW TO IMPROVE SELF STEEM THAT COMPUTER CANNOT BE TEACH. MOREOVER THE ESSENTIAL OF THE THE TEACHERS PRESENCE IS THEY STANDING AS THE SECOND MOTHER. CONSIDERING THE ABOVE REASON, IN MY KNOWLEDGE I BELIEVE THAT TEACHER CANNOT BE REPLACED BY ANY TECHNOLOGY IN THE NEAR FUTURE, EVER.
NOW A DAYS
IN THIS GENERATION,
TECHNOLOGY
IS
HIGHLY
IN-DEMAND IN ALL ASPECT IN OUR
LIVES
, INCLUDING EDUCATION, A NUMBERS OF
PEOPLE
SAYS THAT
TEACHER
WILL
BE REPLACED
BY COMPUTER IN THE
NEXT
ERA.

HOWEVER
, THERE ARE NUMEROUS ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF USING
TECHNOLOGY
REGARDING ON HOW STUDENTS LEARN.

FIRSTLY
, THE ADVANTAGE OF USING COMPUTER IN LEARNING IS, IT IS
EXTREMELY
CONVENIENT
ESPECIALLY
TO THOSE PUPILS WHO HAVE DISABILITY SUCH AS SPEAKING OR WALKING, IT IS EASY FOR THEM DUE TO THE FACT THAT THEY CAN STUDY IN-HOME USING COMPUTER,
INSTEAD
OF GOING TO SCHOOL. THE SECOND REASON IS, IT IS MUCH AFFORDABLE DUE TO THE FACT THAT PARENTS CAN NOT PAY THEIR TUITION ANYMORE IF THEY WILL STUDY AT HOME.
ON THE CONTRARY
, USING
TECHNOLOGY
IN LEARNING CAN BE MORE DIFFICULT TO LEARN, OWING THE FACT THAT WE KNOW THAT
TEACHER
IS
ONLY
HAVE THE ABILITY AND THE KNOWLEDGE TO TEACH OUR CHILDREN THAT COMPUTER CANNOT ACQUIRE,
FOR INSTANCE
ONLY
TEACHER
CAN
SHOWS
OR
IMMERGE
THE STUDENTS HIDING
SKILLS
, THEY
ALSO
TEACH PUPILS ON HOW TO SOCIALIZE, OR HOW TO
IMPROVE
SELF
STEEM
THAT COMPUTER CANNOT BE
TEACH
.
MOREOVER
THE ESSENTIAL OF
THE THE
TEACHERS
PRESENCE IS THEY STANDING AS THE SECOND MOTHER.

CONSIDERING THE ABOVE REASON, IN MY KNOWLEDGE I BELIEVE THAT
TEACHER
CANNOT
BE REPLACED
BY ANY
TECHNOLOGY
IN THE NEAR FUTURE, EVER.
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IELTS essay As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. v. 3

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