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As a student, what can be done to maintain/promote environmental sustainability?

As a student, what can be done to maintain/promote environmental sustainability? 3beJw
To maintain renewable environment is not easy to do, but need to act in advance by practicing actions to real one as a learner or human being. This paper will mention five elements to save environmental sustainability in beauty, such as plant more trees, use renewable energy, recycle, minimize waste, and create and support organization to education are raised and explained. Planting more trees and plants has many environmental, economic, and social benefits. The main cause of climate change is the huge amount of greenhouse gases. Trees improve the air quality of the place where we live by absorbing carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen and also give us food, furniture and shade. A regularly size of trees can clean carbon dioxide on average, around 2. 5 tons of carbon dioxide is absorbed and stored by one acre of young forest every year. The trees also combat the greenhouse effects, reduce the pressure on heating and cooling, protect climatic change and natural disasters, and save energy. Next, is use renewable energy, can be got enough energy from renewable fuels like solar energy, hydroelectric energy or wind power to be able to stop using fossil fuels completely. Furthermore, green energy, generally, it indicates energies that are non-traditional and have low environmental impact. After, recycling is the process of converting waste materials into materials and objects. Recycling reduces pressure on raw materials, reduces mining, and fuel and transporting, and processing minerals. Recycling is the best thing to encourage sustainability. Minimize waste is pushed. Waste minimization is a set of process and practices intended to reduce the amount of waste produced. Reducing food waste can significantly help the environment as well as save people’ lives grocery bill. Last but not least, is create and support organization to educate human beings on the earth to understand how to prevent the lives on this planet. Government or president must support and find nonprofit organization in its area that facilitate sustainability and join these groups. Many organizations, which are advocating environmental sustainability and awareness on the internet. All in all, these things, are just a little thing which can advertise our atmosphere to stay for long of rest of life of nature. In conclusion, holding sustainable environment is not just only for leaders to advance universe but also starting from learners to keep and indicate the positive and impact on globe. We need to join together to overcome fear of bad things in order to maintain environmental sustainability by the keys above.
To maintain
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renewable
environment is not easy to do,
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but
need to act in advance by practicing actions to real one as a learner or human being. This paper will mention five elements to save
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environmental
sustainability in beauty, such as plant more
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trees
,
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use
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renewable
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energy
, recycle, minimize
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waste
, and create and support
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organization
to education
are raised
and
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explained
.

Planting more
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trees
and plants has
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many
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environmental
, economic, and social benefits. The main cause of climate
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change
is the huge amount of greenhouse gases.
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Trees
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improve
the air quality of the place where we
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live
by absorbing carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen and
also
give us food, furniture and shade. A
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regularly size
of
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trees
can clean carbon dioxide on average, around 2. 5 tons of carbon dioxide
is absorbed
and stored by one acre of young forest every year. The
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trees
also
combat the greenhouse effects,
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reduce
the pressure on heating and cooling, protect climatic
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change
and natural disasters, and save
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energy
.
Next
, is
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use
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renewable
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energy
, can be
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got
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enough
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energy
from
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renewable
fuels like solar
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energy
, hydroelectric
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energy
or wind power to be able to
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stop
using fossil fuels completely.
Furthermore
, green
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energy
,
generally
, it indicates
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energies
that are non-traditional and have low
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environmental
impact. After, recycling is the process of converting
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waste
materials into materials and objects. Recycling
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reduces
pressure on raw materials,
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reduces
mining, and fuel and transporting, and processing minerals. Recycling is the best thing to encourage sustainability. Minimize
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waste
is pushed
.
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Waste
minimization is a set of process and practices intended to
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reduce
the amount of
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waste
produced. Reducing food
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waste
can
significantly
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help
the environment
as well
as
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save
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people
’
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lives
grocery bill. Last
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but
not least, is
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create
and support
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organization
to educate human beings on the earth to understand how to
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prevent
the
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lives
on this planet.
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Government
or president
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must
support and find nonprofit
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organization
in its area that facilitate sustainability and
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join
these groups.
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Many
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organizations
, which are advocating
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environmental
sustainability and awareness on the internet. All in all, these things, are
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just
a
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little
thing which can advertise our atmosphere to stay for long of rest of life of nature.

In conclusion
, holding sustainable environment is not
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just
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only
for leaders to advance universe
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but
also
starting from learners to
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keep
and indicate the
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positive
and impact on globe. We need to
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join
together to overcome fear of
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bad
things in order to maintain
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environmental
sustainability by the keys above.
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IELTS essay As a student, what can be done to maintain/promote environmental sustainability?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
415 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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