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As a result of international tourism, many historic buildings are being destroyed. What could be done to prevent this?

As a result of international tourism, many historic buildings are being destroyed. What could be done to prevent this? 0AlYl
Tourism is the proliferating industry around the world. Tourism can bring many advantages to any country's economy, but be mindful that tourism is also associated with some drawbacks. The most prominent one is the damage of heritage and ancient place itself. I believe this problem can be solved by taking specific measures carefully like charge the entry fee and keep all legacy under the transparent protection shield. To exemplify with the Stonehenge is the giant size of the ancient stones and the fact that people around the world come to visit that place. Interestingly, according to the recent article published by National geographic, archaeologists are surprised to see damages on it and are sceptical about how to fix those damages. I believe that it can curb by prohibiting the people from coming near to it, touching it, or mishandling the relic. If this mishandle has been caught tourist has to pay a hefty fine. For that matter, I believe management can build a transparent wall around the monument, and people enjoy its view from outside the wall without touching the stones. There are many ancient Muslim tombs in India that are damaging because of the limited fund. In general, there is free entry for everyone inside the mausoleum like Taj Mahal in Agra, and with massive footprints, it's hard for the managing officials to maintain it. Therefore, I believe a nominal access fee should be at least so the government can generate enough funds for its maintenance. Moreover, by paying the entrance charges, visitors will gain a sense of responsibility and pay respect toward this one earth wonder. In conclusion, in my opinion, the main danger to the earth heritage and ancient structure and buildings is its damage, and to mitigate this issue, the protection of the structure and the entry fee is deemed necessary.
Tourism is the proliferating industry around the world. Tourism can bring
many
advantages to any country's economy,
but
be mindful that tourism is
also
associated with
some
drawbacks. The most prominent one is the
damage of
heritage and
ancient
place itself. I
believe
this problem can
be solved
by taking specific measures
carefully
like charge the entry fee and
keep
all legacy under the transparent protection shield.

To exemplify with the Stonehenge is the giant size of the
ancient
stones and the fact that
people
around the world
come
to visit that place.
Interestingly
, according to the recent article published by National geographic, archaeologists
are surprised
to
see
damages on it and are
sceptical
about how to
fix
those damages. I
believe
that it can curb by prohibiting the
people
from coming near to it, touching it, or mishandling the relic.
If
this mishandle
has
been caught
tourist
has to
pay a hefty fine. For that matter, I
believe
management can build a transparent wall around the monument, and
people
enjoy its view from outside the wall without touching the stones.

There are
many
ancient
Muslim tombs in India that are damaging
because
of the limited fund.
In general
, there is free entry for everyone inside the mausoleum like Taj Mahal in Agra, and with massive footprints, it's
hard
for the managing officials to maintain it.
Therefore
, I
believe
a nominal access fee should be at least
so
the
government
can generate
enough
funds for its maintenance.
Moreover
, by paying the entrance charges, visitors will gain a sense of responsibility and pay respect toward this one earth wonder.

In conclusion
, in my opinion, the main
danger
to the earth heritage and
ancient
structure and buildings is its
damage
, and to mitigate this issue, the protection of the structure and the entry fee
is deemed
necessary.
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IELTS essay As a result of international tourism, many historic buildings are being destroyed. What could be done to prevent this?

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