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THE GOVERNMENT SPENT A LOT OF MONEY ON ARTS SUCH AS PAINTINGS AND SCULPTURES ON PUBLIC AREA,IS A WASTE OF MONEY.THE GOVERNMENT MUST INVEST THIS MONEY ON PUBLIC SERVICES INSTEAD? TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE?

THE GOVERNMENT SPENT A LOT OF MONEY ON ARTS SUCH AS PAINTINGS AND SCULPTURES ON PUBLIC AREA, IS A WASTE OF MONEY. THE GOVERNMENT MUST INVEST THIS MONEY ON PUBLIC SERVICES INSTEAD? PVENX
Nowadays, many nations spend more wealth of different craft forms like paintings and sculptures in order to enhance the beauty of their city. Some others believe that the authorities should spend this capital for other vital developments of a country rather than layout on the arts. I firmly believe that placing artworks in cities is not a waste of fund. Some art projects require help from the state government. In many countries, there are many works of arts in public places like streets, squares and main centre. To give an ideal example in Bangalore, recently they redeveloped many sculptures and paintings in many central areas of the city which has added new looks to the city. There is no doubt that these art creations represent our culture, tradition and heritage. Besides, it would become a talking point and a landmark for many visitors and tourists. So the government should help and fund the craft workers to produce their unique creations because without which our cities would not be much exciting and attractive. However, other critics argue that, the central government should put money onto the betterment of other essential areas of the country. The state budget needs to spend on education, health care, infrastructure and security for the proper functioning of a nation, whereas, investing these cash on artworks is a symbol of luxury. In addition to that they think economical ways like awareness and education, the department can teach the public how to keep the towns clean, green and attractive. To conclude, while it can be argued that too much emphasis is placed on the money need to expend for the developments of a nation, my own opinion is that investing some funds in building various art pieces in public places is not a bad idea.
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nations spend more wealth of
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different
craft forms like paintings and sculptures in order to enhance the beauty of their city.
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Some
others believe that the authorities should spend this capital for
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other
vital developments of a country
rather
than layout on the
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arts
. I
firmly
believe that placing artworks in
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cities
is not a waste of fund.

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art
projects require
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help
from the state
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government
. In
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many
countries, there are
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many
works of
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arts
in public places like streets, squares and main
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centre
. To give an ideal example in Bangalore, recently they redeveloped
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many
sculptures and paintings in
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many
central areas of the city which has
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added
new looks to the city. There is no doubt that these
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art
creations represent our culture, tradition and heritage.
Besides
, it would become a talking point and a landmark for
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many
visitors and tourists.
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So
the
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government
should
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help
and fund the craft workers to produce their unique creations
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because
without which our
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cities
would not be much exciting and attractive.

However
,
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other
critics argue that, the central
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government
should put money onto the betterment of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
essential areas of the country. The state budget needs to spend on education, health care, infrastructure and security for the proper functioning of a nation, whereas, investing these cash on artworks is a symbol of luxury.
In addition
to that they
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think
economical ways like awareness and education, the department can teach the public how to
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keep
the towns clean, green and attractive.

To conclude
, while it can
be argued
that too much emphasis
is placed
on the money need to expend for the developments of a nation, my
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own
opinion is that investing
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some
funds in building various
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art
pieces in public places is not a
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bad
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idea
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IELTS essay THE GOVERNMENT SPENT A LOT OF MONEY ON ARTS SUCH AS PAINTINGS AND SCULPTURES ON PUBLIC AREA, IS A WASTE OF MONEY. THE GOVERNMENT MUST INVEST THIS MONEY ON PUBLIC SERVICES INSTEAD?

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297 words
7
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