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Arts is going well and I’m sure they are

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I’m LAYAN MOHAMMED ALJOEHANI, and I would like to apply to work in Billybeez-JEDDAH Here is a brief about me. I have completed General Secondary Education. I secured {5. 5/9} in IELTS ACADEMIC. I am confident that I have the skills to excel at your organisation. I have always dreamed of being a part of your team work due to the development opportunities you provide. I request you to give me an opportunity, and I'm sure I'll be trustworthy. Please refer to my resume, attached with the email, for detailed information.

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Here is a brief about me. I have completed General Secondary Education. I secured {5. 5/9} in IELTS ACADEMIC.

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skills
 to excel at your Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
. I have always dreamed of being a part of your team work due to the development opportunities you provide.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 request you to give me an opportunity, and I'm sure I'll be trustworthy.

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Please
 refer to my resume, attached with the email, for detailed information. 

IELTS essay Arts is going well and I’m sure they are

Essay

American English

5 paragraphs

91 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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