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Arts is going well and I’m sure they are

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I’m LAYAN MOHAMMED ALJOEHANI, and I would like to apply to work in Billybeez-JEDDAH Here is a brief about me. I have completed General Secondary Education. I secured {5. 5/9} in IELTS ACADEMIC. I am confident that I have the skills to excel at your organisation. I have always dreamed of being a part of your team work due to the development opportunities you provide. I request you to give me an opportunity, and I'm sure I'll be trustworthy. Please refer to my resume, attached with the email, for detailed information.
I’m
LAYAN
MOHAMMED
ALJOEHANI
, and I would like to apply to work in
Billybeez-JEDDAH


Here is a brief about me. I have completed General Secondary Education. I secured {5. 5/9} in IELTS ACADEMIC.

I am confident that I have the
skills
to excel at your
organisation
. I have always dreamed of being a part of your team work due to the development opportunities you provide.

I
request you to give me an opportunity, and I'm sure I'll be trustworthy.

Please
refer to my resume, attached with the email, for detailed information.
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IELTS essay Arts is going well and I’m sure they are

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
91 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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