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What is the most important innovation of the past 200 years

What is the most important innovation of the past 200 years EdJ5q
These days the most significant innovations are changing Day by Day. In my opinion in the last two decades it has been smartphone. From 20th century until now it has been car. No matter was it attractive and comfortable or unattractive and uncomfortable. By considering deeply as i found book printer has become the most significant innovation. First reason is that i faced in several books because i read the book which is about Benjamin Franklin. He lived 200 years ago. He was engrossed in writing books. As i read he worked several years for book printing company. Second reason is plenty of people love to read books and there were people who can't live without books. Especially before discovering the television, computer whatever belong to computer technology. In my opinion people of west realized the importance of reading earlier than the people of east. and have a gold quote it's: more you learn more you earn. For them the lazy Person who reads plenty of books is more useful for the country than the diligent person who does not read book at all. Books have been read for many centuries. Because many wisemen passed from this world all of them have become the friend of book Therefore as i found the book printer has become the most significant innovation of the past 200 years
These days the most significant innovations are changing Day by Day. In my opinion in the last two decades it has been smartphone. From 20th century until
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found
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printer has become the most significant innovation.
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printer has become the most significant innovation of the past 200
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IELTS essay What is the most important innovation of the past 200 years

Essay
  American English
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224 words
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