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Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?

At present, number of person prefer to migrate in urbanized cities. this essay will suggest the principal cause of this issue is receiving education and healthcare facilities and increase in land prices and environmental issues as a problem followed by a reasoned conclusion. Both the aspects are outlined below. Discussing the reasons, the most common one is to gain a good quality of education. In village Universities are not constructed so people migrate to city to conduct future studies. The second main cause is absence of a medical amenities in suburbs. Residing in a town would allow a personage to get emergency treatment as soon as possible. For instance, according to the survey conducted by Economic Times, 70% of villagers has shifted to urban areas in 2020. in order to secure the best medical treatment. hence, these are two main reasons which force people to move out of a rural areas. on the contrary, the foremost impact is noticed on a land prices which means that if the population started flooding in the city, then definitely land prices would surged that lead to increase a slum areas. the other repercussion is seen on atmosphere. For example, if more people come to urban area that mean more number of vehicle on the road. those automobiles releases fumes onto environment which lead to global warming. In conclusion, it can finally be commented that many positive aspects are associated with it, despite government should take major steps to provide all basic amenities in rural area such as construing more and more school as well as colleges and also public health care centers with appropriate advanced medical equipment.
At present, number of person prefer to migrate in urbanized cities.
this
essay will suggest the principal cause of this issue is receiving education and healthcare facilities and increase in land prices and environmental issues as a problem followed by a reasoned conclusion. Both the aspects
are outlined
below.

Discussing the reasons, the most common one is to gain a
good
quality of education. In village Universities are not
constructed
so
people
migrate to city to conduct future studies. The second main cause is absence of
a medical amenities
in suburbs. Residing in a town would
allow
a personage to
get
emergency treatment as
soon
as possible.
For instance
, according to the survey conducted by Economic Times, 70% of villagers has shifted to urban
areas
in 2020.
in
order to secure the best medical treatment.
hence
, these are two main reasons which force
people
to
move
out of
a rural areas
.

on
the contrary, the foremost impact
is noticed
on a land prices which means that if the population
started
flooding in the city, then definitely land prices would
surged
that lead to increase a slum
areas
.
the
other repercussion is
seen
on atmosphere.
For example
, if more
people
come
to urban
area
that mean more number of vehicle on the road.
those
automobiles
releases
fumes onto environment which lead to global warming.

In conclusion
, it can
finally
be commented
that
many
positive
aspects
are associated
with it, despite
government
should take major steps to provide all basic amenities in rural
area
such as construing more and more school
as well
as colleges and
also
public health care centers with appropriate advanced medical equipment.
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IELTS essay Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
274 words
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