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Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?

Since the evolution of cities, There has been a contentious influx of human clusters into many cities. What can be the main reason behind such an increased population? Such a drastic changes are never expected. What devasted situations can it lead to? The main cause of shooting crowd and the inconvenience they lead will be discussed further. Since last 5 decade city’s are well known choice of living over the ruler part of any country. Where all kind of living facilities available as well as basic needs of human widely available. Moreover, well developed areas with industrialization, commercialization are available within the cities’. In order to fulfil the financial needs residents of big towns finds employment nearby their residential accommodations. According to analyst in The UK they mentioned” cities offers vital necessity in form of education, Job and housing” over the villages which shall attract many newer migrants. However, Constant inclining numbers of many out-comers had made some challenges. The higher prices of living places is because of increasing demand day by day. Moreover, Many lager cities for instance; Toronto, Brampton, London had been converted into slum, That makes painful situation for citizens. Overpopulation creates an enormous amount of demands as well as congestion which are never a feverous place for humans. In conclusion, The rising number of facilities are magnetic enough to imply many newcomers from villages. In addition better schooling and entertainment facilities shall be the another reason. However, the land and some resources are not rising equiproportional to the population which makes crowed and dencier places.
Since the evolution of
cities
, There has been a contentious influx of human clusters into
many
cities
. What can be the main reason behind such an increased population? Such a drastic
changes
are never
expected
. What
devasted
situations can it lead to? The main cause of shooting crowd and the inconvenience they lead will
be discussed
further
.

Since
last 5 decade
city’s
are
well
known choice of living over the ruler part of any country.
Where
all kind of living facilities available as
well
as basic needs of human
widely
available.
Moreover
,
well developed
areas with industrialization, commercialization are available within the
cities’
. In order to fulfil the financial needs residents of
big
towns finds employment nearby their residential accommodations. According to analyst in The UK they mentioned”
cities
offers vital necessity in form of education, Job and housing” over the villages which shall attract
many
newer migrants.

However
, Constant inclining numbers of
many
out-comers had made
some
challenges. The higher prices of living places is
because
of increasing demand day by day.
Moreover
,
Many
lager
cities
for instance
; Toronto, Brampton, London had
been converted
into slum, That
makes
painful situation for citizens. Overpopulation creates an enormous amount of demands as
well
as congestion which are never a feverous place for humans.

In conclusion
, The rising number of facilities are magnetic
enough
to imply
many
newcomers from villages. In
addition
better schooling and entertainment facilities shall be the another reason.
However
, the land and
some
resources are not rising
equiproportional
to the population which
makes
crowed and
dencier
places.
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IELTS essay Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?

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