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Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?

Since the evolution of cities, There has been a contentious influx of human clusters into many cities. What can be the main reason behind such an increased population? Such a drastic changes are never expected. What devasted situations can it lead to? The main cause of shooting crowd and the inconvenience they lead will be discussed further. Since last 5 decade city’s are well known choice of living over the ruler part of any country. Where all kind of living facilities available as well as basic needs of human widely available. Moreover, well developed areas with industrialization, commercialization are available within the cities’. In order to fulfil the financial needs residents of big towns finds employment nearby their residential accommodations. According to analyst in The UK they mentioned” cities offers vital necessity in form of education, Job and housing” over the villages which shall attract many newer migrants. However, Constant inclining numbers of many out-comers had made some challenges. The higher prices of living places is because of increasing demand day by day. Moreover, Many lager cities for instance; Toronto, Brampton, London had been converted into slum, That makes painful situation for citizens. Overpopulation creates an enormous amount of demands as well as congestion which are never a feverous place for humans. In conclusion, The rising number of facilities are magnetic enough to imply many newcomers from villages. In addition better schooling and entertainment facilities shall be the another reason. However, the land and some resources are not rising equiproportional to the population which makes crowed and dencier places.

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cities
, There has been a contentious influx of human clusters into This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
. What can be the main reason behind such an increased population? Such a drastic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
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expected
. What Possible spelling mistake found.departeddevoteddebateddevastateddeviseddeviated
devasted
 situations can it lead to? The main cause of shooting crowd and the inconvenience they lead will be discussed
further
.

“Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 last 5 decade Did you mean the plural instead of the possessive?citys
city’s
 are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
well
 known choice of living over the ruler part of any country. “Where” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Where
 all kind of living facilities available as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
well
 as basic needs of human widely
 available. Moreover
, This word is normally spelled with a hyphen.well-developed
well developed
 areas with industrialization, commercialization are available within the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities’
. In order to fulfil the financial needs residents of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 towns finds employment nearby their residential accommodations. According to analyst in The UK they mentioned” You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
 offers vital necessity in form of education, Job and housing” over the villages which shall attract This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 newer migrants.

However
, Constant inclining numbers of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 out-comers had made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 challenges. The higher prices of living places is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of increasing demand day by day. Moreover
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 lager You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmetropoliscentermunicipalitydowntownplacecapital
cities
for instance
; Toronto, Brampton, London had been converted
 into slum, That This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 painful situation for citizens. Overpopulation creates an enormous amount of demands as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrongtogether
well
 as congestion which are never a feverous place for humans.

In conclusion
, The rising number of facilities are magnetic This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to imply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 newcomers from villages. In Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?addition,
addition
 better schooling and entertainment facilities shall be the another reason. However
, the land and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 resources are not rising Possible spelling mistake found.
equiproportional
 to the population which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 crowed and Possible spelling mistake found.denier
dencier
 places. 