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Around the world more and more people today are living in urban areas. Why is this? What problems does this cause?

Everyone wants to spend a better lifestyle in, where is all facility get very easily. This is being all over the world caused an easy life and everything will available in one place. More and more masses are leaving sleepy areas. Therefore, youths have uplevel of degree, and there are not those jobs. For example, A doctor and engineer sorts of work are not available, where those people already living. Moreover, not advance hospital and education system so on. This is being since when public to getting everything in urban. The huge amount of shortage in a rural area like there is not water clean, bad roads and broken houses. Because human want to rid of those problems. It is a desire. Outside living areas have not medical facilities, that's why people being moved to the city. In developed urban has everything, which a person of desire. Such as security, different types of education, clean water and one of heavy thing is better employment service. Every year a high percentage of youngsters have owned face towards the town side. The big cause is getting in both hands without and trouble. Government is giving every student to fund to complete the whole study. To conclude, the Outside area has not that service, which has a city so our government should make those service which is now in non-rural areas.

Everyone wants to spend a better lifestyle in, where is all facility This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
easily
. This is being all over the world caused an easy life and everything will available in one place. More and more masses are leaving sleepy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. Therefore
, youths have Possible spelling mistake found.up level
uplevel
 of degree, and there are not those jobs. For example
, A doctor and engineer sorts of work are not available, where those This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 already living. Moreover
, not advance hospital and education system This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. This is being since when public to getting everything in urban. The huge amount of shortage in a rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 like there is It seems that the adverb “not” is incorrect in this context.no water
not water
 clean, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 roads and broken This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 human want to rid of those problems. It is a desire.

Outside living You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
 have not medical facilities, that's why This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the city. In developed urban has everything, which a person of desire. Such as security, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 types of education, clean water and one of heavy thing is better employment service. Every year a high percentage of youngsters have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
 face towards the town side. The This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 cause is getting in both hands without and trouble. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 is giving every student to fund to complete the whole study. To conclude
, the Outside You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has not that service, which has a Use a comma before ‘so’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).city,
city
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 those service which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 in non-rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
areas
. 