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Arguments about three theories are related to the extinction was happened before 200 million years

Arguments about three theories are related to the extinction was happened before 200 million years VEmnA

At the end of the Traiassic period 200 million years ago, there was a large extinction happened. Both the lecture and the reading talk about this massive extinction and what is the caused for this extinction. The former says that there is still no good explanation for what was happened in that period, while the latter emphasizes three explanation for this extinction. To begin with, one of these explanation is related to the decline of sea levels. The professor disagrees with this point. In fact, she mentions that most of the ocean populations that live in the shallows and land species are adapted with gradual changes, and this fluctuation is happened gradual, which was for 7 million years. However, the text highlights that fluctuating effect on food chains worldwide, leading to mass extinctions. Furthermore, the second point of this extinction revolves around massive climate cooling. The instructor sees this idea differently. She believes that SO2 always combines with water and there is no explanation to stay at the atmosphere. She adds that it is unlikely to any volcanic eruption to release that amount of SO2. On the other hand, the passage claims that increasing with volcanic activity leads to increase the amount of SO2. SO2 is one of the cause that change climate. Last but not least, the final argument is here about the Triassic period is connected with asteroid strike. The speaker arguments this theory because it is not accurate information. The women introduces that if this is happened, it goes for 12 million years ago, which is way before the extinction was happened. Nevertheless, the author points out that

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Traiassic
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extinction
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happened
. Both the lecture and the reading talk about this massive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withannihilationeliminationdestructionobsolescence
extinction
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extinction
. The former says that there is still
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explanation
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happened
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explanation
 for this extinction.

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begin
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is related
 to the decline of sea levels. The professor disagrees with this point. In fact, she mentions that most of the ocean populations that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in the shallows and land species are adapted
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changes
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happened
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, the text highlights that fluctuating effect on food chains worldwide, leading to mass extinctions.

Furthermore
, the second point of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withannihilationeliminationdestructionobsolescence
extinction
 revolves around massive climate cooling. The instructor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnesses
sees
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idea
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. She believes that SO2 always combines with water and there is no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommentinterpretationconfessionevidencemotivesense
explanation
 to stay at the atmosphere. She This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 that it is unlikely to any volcanic eruption to release that amount of SO2. On the other hand
, the passage claims that increasing with volcanic activity leads to increase the amount of SO2. SO2 is one of the cause that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 climate.

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but
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introduces
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happened
, it goes for 12 million years ago, which is way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withannihilationeliminationdestructionobsolescence
extinction
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happened
. Nevertheless
, the author points out that