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Argue of use of water and saving

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Nowadays people argue that water is being wasted by human beings and they believe that it will be finished in future time, while, a group of people think that it is renewable resources so, it will not finished, however I will discuss it's point of view in the upcoming paragraph. Analysing the statement and explaining further, emphatically, individuals are doing waste water without any work and they have not need of water yet, they excess use of water. For instance, some children even elder also, they do brush then tap open being by them due to which the water are being wasted. In addition to this, it must be teach by parents that they also tell about water value them. On the other hand, there are myriad reason why people consider that water is renewable resources, primarily, it is natural resources of nature because it come through rain on the earth and again obersve it soil. Similarly, mankind take it easily it but in some areas, people can not take smoothly likewise Rajasthan. To encapsulate according to the arguments aforementioned above I can reach to a conclusion that it is natural process of water due to which everyone take it although, use for anything but human beings should be consider value of water.
Nowadays
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people
argue that
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water
is
being wasted
by human
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beings and
they believe that it will
be finished
in future time, while, a group of
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people
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think
that it is renewable resources
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so
, it will not
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finished
,
however
I will discuss
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it's
point of view in the upcoming paragraph.
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Analysing
the statement and explaining
further
,
emphatically
, individuals are doing waste
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water
without any
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work and
they have not
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need
of
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water
yet
, they excess
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use
of
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water
.
For instance
,
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some
children even elder
also
, they do brush then tap open being by them due to which the
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water
are
being wasted
.
In addition
to this, it
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must
be
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teach
by parents that they
also
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tell
about
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water
value them.
On the other hand
, there are myriad reason why
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people
consider that
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water
is renewable resources,
primarily
, it is natural resources of nature
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because
it
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come
through rain on the earth and again
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obersve
it
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soil
.
Similarly
, mankind take it
easily
it
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but
in
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some
areas,
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people
can not take
smoothly
likewise
Rajasthan. To encapsulate according to the arguments aforementioned above I can reach to a conclusion that it is natural process of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
water
due to which everyone
The pronoun 'everyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "takes", "took".
take
it although,
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use
for anything
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but
human beings should be
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consider
value of
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water
.
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IELTS essay Argue of use of water and saving

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
213 words
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