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Are safety laws necessary

Are safety laws necessary oEJPB
In the present time county develops day by day. At that moment people are busy with their works and they have not much time to think about their safty side. Due to that point safety equipment are the main items for the people need to take care of their life. Firstly, I previously mentioned, the country's main facilities will become gradually increase. As an example the differentareas of high way will become an expand. At that situation lots of workers have to give their support to complete the target as soon as possible. Furthermore, due to that reason safety laws are important as many lives can be saved. Moreover, in now days, may constructions company promote the wearing hats or safety jacket for protect the workers life. Such as the jackets covered with highlight yellow and orange colour. Because in the night the colours help to eye catching and also it easily find the person who works in the dangerous area. In addition, accidents can be happen only sometimes. But workers meet to remain prepared everytime prevention is better than cure and also in the present many an engineer are finding lots of technological systems. Which are help to safety laws. Red and white colour road bulbs are one of the safety guide people can follow for the protection. To sum up, even during road travel, wearing safety clothes give more benefit for everyone. Example, during the driving people can easily recognise the workers and it help to protect their life and body. In my opinion, safety is the first rule people have take care the most important thing in their whole life. Because everyone loves their life. so as a human have to face many challenging situationsin their life. The results can be good or bad. Ithin people have different kinds of feeling. But safety laws are help to maintain positive mind.
In the present time county develops day by day. At that moment
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people
are busy with their
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works and
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think
about their
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safty
side. Due to that point
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safety
equipment are the main items for the
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people
need to take care of their
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life
.
Firstly
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gradually
increase.
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of high way will become
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an expand
. At that situation lots of
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workers
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have to
give their support to complete the target as
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soon
as possible.
Furthermore
, due to that reason
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safety
laws are
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important
as
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many
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lives
can
be saved
.
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, in
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now
days, may constructions
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company
promote the wearing hats or
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safety
jacket for protect the
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workers
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life
. Such as the jackets covered with highlight yellow and orange
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colour
.
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Because
in the night the
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colours
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help
to eye catching and
also
it
easily
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find
the person who works in the
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dangerous
area.
In addition
, accidents can be
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happen
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sometimes
.
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But
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workers
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meet
to remain prepared
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everytime
prevention is better than cure and
also
in the present
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many
an engineer are finding lots of technological systems.
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are
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help
to
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safety
laws. Red and white
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colour
road bulbs are one of the
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safety
guide
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people
can follow for the protection. To sum up, even during road travel, wearing
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safety
clothes give more benefit for everyone. Example, during the driving
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people
can
easily
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recognise
the
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workers
and it
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help
to protect their
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life
and body. In my opinion,
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safety
is the
first
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rule
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people
have take care the most
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thing in their whole
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life
.
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everyone
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life
.
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so
as a human
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have to
face
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many
challenging
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situationsin
their
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life
. The results can be
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good
or
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.
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Ithin
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different
kinds of feeling.
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But
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safety
laws are
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help
to maintain
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positive
mind.
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IELTS essay Are safety laws necessary

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
313 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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