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There are more city nowaday. You prefer city or countryside

There are more city nowaday. You prefer city or countryside VlgKQ
I prefer to live in a city because i think that life in a city is always more exciting and more comfortable than life in a country or in a small town. First of all, in cities there is usually something to do or somewhere to go. In the city there is a large access to education an there is easier to find good and ineresting job. Moreover there is a good selection of cinemas, galeries, theaters or restaurants, where people can spand their free time. There is always something interesting and it is impossible to be bored.
I prefer to
live
in a city
because
i
think
that life in a city is always more exciting and more comfortable than life in a country or in a
small
town.

First of all
, in
cities
there is
usually
something to do or somewhere to go. In the city there is
a large access
to education
an there
is easier to find
good
and
ineresting
job.
Moreover
there is a
good
selection of cinemas,
galeries
, theaters or restaurants, where
people
can
spand
their free time. There is always something interesting and it is impossible to
be bored
.
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IELTS essay There are more city nowaday. You prefer city or countryside

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
98 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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