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It is now possible to order almost any item over the Internet and have it delivered to one’s home. As a result, people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is now possible to order almost any item over the Internet and have it delivered to one’s home. As a result, people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits. with this statement? MmVmk
Online shopping and home delivery causes concerns that consumers may become more hasty and less cautious. However, I do not believe that online shopping has this effect. In fact, I would say that the opposite is true. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons that online shopping actually helps shoppers make smarter choices. Internet shopping actually makes people more patient while they shop, not less patient. This is because, even with home delivery, online shopping is actually less “instant” than traditional shopping in stores. After all, if someone goes into a store, they can leave minutes later with the items they purchased. However, even the fastest delivery methods for online goods take at least a day. As a result, people are actually more accustomed to longer waits before they receive something they’ve bought. Not only does online shopping make buyers more patient, it also facilitates careful, informed choices for buyers. This is because there is more competition between different sellers online than there is in a single store. If someone goes to a store in person, they will see a relatively small range of brand names, and they certainly won’t see the offerings of other stores. In contrast, online customers can compare just about every brand of any given product and browse the websites of multiple stores. This gives customers all the information they need to make the best possible purchases. When shopping on the Web, customers can learn patience because they must wait for their items to be delivered to them, and even more importantly, customers can access all of the information they need to choose the right items. Ultimately, online shopping is truly a positive development, not a negative one.
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and home delivery causes concerns that consumers may become more hasty and less cautious.
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, I do not believe that
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online
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has this effect. In fact, I would say that the opposite is true. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons that
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online
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actually
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helps
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, even with home delivery,
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is actually less “instant” than traditional
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in
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.
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, if someone goes into a
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, they can
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minutes later with the items they
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purchased
.
However
, even the fastest delivery methods for
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take at least a day.
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facilitates careful, informed choices for buyers. This is
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because
there is more competition between
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different
sellers
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than there is in a single
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. If someone goes to a
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in person, they will
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the offerings of other
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.
In contrast
,
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customers
can compare
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about every brand of any
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product and browse the websites of multiple
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stores
. This gives
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customers
all the information they need to
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the best possible
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.

When
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on the Web,
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customers
can learn patience
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because
they
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wait for their items to
be delivered
to them, and even more
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can access
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all of the
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Ultimately
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is
truly
a
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positive
development, not a
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IELTS essay It is now possible to order almost any item over the Internet and have it delivered to one’s home. As a result, people are no longer patient or careful in their shopping habits. with this statement?

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