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Anything that is good for you can also be bad for you if you do it too much.

Anything that is good for you can also be bad for you if you do it too much. nXPj2
Anything that is good for you can also be bad for you if you do it too much. This argument has both pros and cons. It may lead huge impact for people’s life. To begin with, time management is a huge problem in that argument which I strongly support. For example, spending too much time doing certain activities, whether it's watching movies, playing soccer, reading books, or playing computer games, can have negative effects. The time spent doing those things can take time away from doing other important things, such as homework, housework, or simply spending time with family. Likewise, health problems may occur in people’s life. Such as, if you do physical activity a lot, it may cause health problems or injuries. Secondly, the things what people do or play can be an addiction in their lives. For example, playing computer games every day makes people more introverted and it becomes to damage people’s relationship or health. In addition, the things that people think good, it can hurt people in their lives. Such as, loving someone is good thing for everyone but when the person that you love starts to harm your feelings, it can be more devastating for people’s lives. As a conclusion, doing or playing one specific thing can be good for you but it also can be bad for you if you do or eat a lot. In my perspective, I completely agree this argument. Otherwise, negative effects outweigh the positive effects.
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for you if you do it too much. This argument has both pros and cons. It may lead huge impact for
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people’s
life.

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begin
with,
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time
management is a huge problem in that argument which I
strongly
support.
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, spending too much
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time
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doing
certain activities, whether it's watching movies,
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playing
soccer, reading books, or
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playing
computer games, can have
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negative
effects. The
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time
spent
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doing
those things can take
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time
away from
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doing
other
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important
things, such as homework, housework, or
simply
spending
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time
with family.
Likewise
, health problems may occur in
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people’s
life. Such as, if you do physical activity a lot, it may cause health problems or injuries.

Secondly
, the things what
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people
do or play can be an addiction in their
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lives
.
For example
,
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playing
computer games every day
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makes
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people
more introverted and it becomes to damage
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people’s
relationship or health.
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, the things that
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people
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think
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, it can hurt
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people
in their
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lives
. Such as, loving someone is
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good
thing for everyone
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but
when the person that you
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love
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starts
to harm your feelings, it can be more devastating for
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people’s
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lives
.

As a conclusion,
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doing
or
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playing
one specific thing can be
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good
for you
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but
it
also
can be
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bad
for you if you do or eat a lot. In my perspective, I completely
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agree
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Otherwise
,
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negative
effects outweigh the
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positive
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IELTS essay Anything that is good for you can also be bad for you if you do it too much.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
246 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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