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1. Please tell me about yourself and your education background in brief.

1. Please tell me about yourself and your education background in brief. x83pw
My name is Anoop. I am basically from India, Kerala, but currently staying in Dublin in order to pursue my Masters in Digital Marketing for professional growth. I did my Bachelors of Engineering in Electronics and communication from SSK College of Engineering and Technology Coimbatore, Tamilnadu. As far as my professional experience is concerned, I had worked as digital marketing executive at onesevencreativesolutions, India for 1 year 11 months where I had responsibility to write, editing, publishing, and promoting content. Finding the right keywords for the site and other clients using software or internet apps like Keyword finder, SEM Rush, Ahrefs, ubbersuggest. Making projects for clients regarding a particular criterion or campaign which includes informational content as well as affiliate marketing content. Moreover, Discussing content strategies with the digital marketing team and head. Next is setting up different social media pages for clients and being regular on it for crisp and responsive action and reply to customer queries. I had worked as Senior IT Engineer in MPG security systems Bangalore, India where I handled the responsibilities such as marketing, coordinating a team, and monitoring and maintenance of electronic security systems such as CCTV and alarm systems. Moreover, when I was working in Zicom Electronic security systems I possessed customer service skills, problem solving, and Leadership skills as I had to handle the project spread across Kerala state. My strengths are I am passionate, and committed. My short term goal is to come in and be productive. I can able to do that as given my past experience, my education, training and I fully expected to be able to do that. Secondly, my long term goal is to achieve a good position where I can build my career and help the organization too. My hobbies are writing articles, reading books, listening music. That’s all about me. Thanks again for this opportunity.
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Anoop
. I am
basically
from India, Kerala,
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but
currently
staying in Dublin in order to pursue my Masters in Digital
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Marketing
for professional growth. I did my Bachelors of Engineering in Electronics and communication from SSK College of Engineering and Technology Coimbatore,
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Tamilnadu
. As far as my professional experience
is concerned
, I had worked as digital
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marketing
executive at
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onesevencreativesolutions
, India for 1 year 11
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months where
I had responsibility to write, editing, publishing, and promoting
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content
. Finding the right keywords for the site and other clients using software or internet apps like Keyword finder, SEM Rush,
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Ahrefs
,
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ubbersuggest
. Making projects for clients regarding a particular criterion or campaign which includes informational
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content
as well
as affiliate
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marketing
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content
.
Moreover
, Discussing
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content
strategies with the digital
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marketing
team and head.
Next
is setting up
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different
social media pages for clients and being regular on it for crisp and responsive action and reply to customer queries.

I had worked as Senior IT Engineer in MPG security
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systems
Bangalore, India where I handled the responsibilities such as
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marketing
, coordinating a team, and monitoring and maintenance of electronic security
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systems
such as CCTV and alarm
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systems
.
Moreover
, when I was working in
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Zicom
Electronic security
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systems
I possessed customer service
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skills
, problem solving, and Leadership
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skills
as I had to handle the project spread across Kerala state.

My strengths are I am passionate, and committed. My short term goal is to
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come
in and be productive. I
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can able to
do that as
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given
my
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past


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experience
, my education, training and I
fully
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expected
to be able to do that.
Secondly
, my long term goal is to achieve a
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good
position where I can build my career and
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help
the organization too.

My hobbies are writing articles, reading books, listening music. That’s all about me. Thanks again for this opportunity.
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IELTS essay 1. Please tell me about yourself and your education background in brief.

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310 words
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