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2. Do you have any work experience, or have completed any internships?

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Yes, I have 2 years of professional experience in the field of digital marketing. Moreover, I had worked in various roles such as Project Engineer and IT Engineer for 5 years in India. Currently, I have been working as a social media manager in start up company situated in India simultaneously I have been supporting one more start up called Amuni Travel Forum in Ireland. Furthermore, I have 2 years of experience as a digital marketing executive. So, I believe that this experience is sufficient for applying this role.

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IELTS essay 2. Do you have any work experience, or have completed any internships?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

89 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.0

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