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Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree?

Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree? gpND
Thanks to globalization, nowadays many countries around the world are entering foreign countries to sell their products and expand their own businesses. However, I personally believe government restrictions should be implemented to avoid a flock of goods from different countries. Firstly, I believe the main reason why there should be limits is that it can cause local markets to go bankrupt. Most countries go foreign countries and sell their products such as electronic devises and vehicles only if they are cheap and modern. In this case, people tend to buy those items which came from different part of the world rather than their own local produced ones, which cause local markets to experience a crisis for a particular period of time. For example, a company called Apple, which sells mobile phones, entered in Central Asia to expand its capasity and reached it, but the problem is that it caused local businesses to collapse as a result of not being able to sell their smartphones to public. Another reason why government restrictions are important is that it can avoid illegal products from spreading over the country. Many countries are trying to sell items which are not legal including pirotechnicals and sharp tools so as to owe good income as they are highly demanding items. On this purpose, they are directly entering the countries and earning satisfactory money, all of which cause to have devastating effects on the culture, behaviour of people and ethical development of the countries. For this reason it is crucial to enforce a range of laws to restrict those items, as this can help to maintain a healthy balance in trade circulation. To conlcude, passing enforcements to restrict foreign products not only help local businesses to run steadily in terms of their market value, but also prevent harmful items from entering the country. Therefore, although these commerce without any restrictions may help to gain income, introducing limits by governments is much more beneficial than this based on above reasons.
Thanks to globalization, nowadays
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around the world are entering foreign
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countries
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sell
their
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products
and expand their
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own
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, I
personally
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government
restrictions should
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to avoid a flock of
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goods
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different
countries.

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, I believe the main
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reason
why there should be limits is that it can cause
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local
markets to go bankrupt. Most
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countries
go foreign
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countries
and
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sell
their
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products
such as electronic devises and vehicles
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only
if they are
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cheap
and modern.
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,
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people
tend to
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buy
those
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items
which came from
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different
part of the world
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than their
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own
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local
produced ones, which cause
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local
markets to experience a crisis for a particular period of time.
For example
, a
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company
called Apple, which sells mobile phones, entered in Central Asia to expand its
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capasity
and reached it,
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but
the problem is that it caused
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local
businesses to collapse
as a result
of not being able to
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sell
their smartphones to public.

Another
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reason
why
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government
restrictions are
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important
is that it can avoid illegal
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products
from spreading over the
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country
.
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countries
are trying to
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sell
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items
which are not legal including
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pirotechnicals
and sharp tools
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owe
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good
income as they are
highly
demanding
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items
. On this purpose, they are
directly
entering the
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countries
and earning satisfactory money, all of which cause to have devastating effects on the culture,
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behaviour
of
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people
and ethical development of the
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countries
. For this
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reason
it is crucial to enforce a range of laws to restrict those
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items
, as this can
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help
to maintain a healthy balance in trade circulation.

To
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conlcude
, passing
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enforcements
to restrict foreign
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products
not
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local
businesses to run
steadily
in terms of their market value,
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also
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prevent
harmful
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items
from entering the
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country
.
Therefore
, although
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these commerce
without any restrictions may
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help
to gain income, introducing limits by
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governments
is much more beneficial than this based on above
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reasons
.
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IELTS essay Any country should be able to sell goods to other countries without the restrictions of the government. Do you agree?

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