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answer the following question: 'Do you think Pecos Bill's time with the Coyotes had anything to do with his wanting to be a cowboy?' Explain.

answer the following question: 'Do you think Pecos Bill's time with the Coyotes had anything to do with his wanting to be a cowboy? ' Explain. dqbX2

To be a cowboy was a dream of many children when they was young. By the time, the impact of life cause those boys forgot there young's dream. Back to Pecos Bill, he get lost from his family and be adopted by the Coyotes. Luckily, Pecos not only in safe but also be teached to a hyperactive boy. Those animal was one of the teacher who told the boy how to survive in the middle of animal area. Cause the Coyotes was an animal cannot taught Bill knowledge of school like alphabet or mathematics but there knowledge of survive of life was priceless. So what was Pecos Bill get from these new "friends"? It was signal calls, the loyalty or to move fast that the eye cannot follow. How good it was? I agree the statement that Pecos Bill'stime with the Coyotes had impact on Bill 's mind to be a cowboy.

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