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another world ocean and beach

another world ocean and beach Ep8OM

in this world we have a lot of sea, beach and ocean. Let me ask u about their words Maybe this words meaning just a places to you But to me this words meaning a lot of thing the are meaning strong, energy, beautiful, super and another words i like the sea so much when i went there i can just sit down and listening for the waves sounds it’s look like a snog to me And not just a song it is sounds like a bowerful, beautiful and sweet song. When i went there i fill great. let me talk a little bit about the sweet creatures the fishes dont u think the are so cute? I think that i love them so much, the fishes have Gills to help them breathe in water, and the have scales all over their bodies healp to safe them from dangerous, they did not have like us a feet or ligs or hands the have tails and fins Help them to swim. Finally guys I hope youu have fun with me♥️

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 this world we have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 sea, beach and ocean.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me ask u about their words

Maybe this words meaning This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a place" or simply "places"?a placeplaces
a places
 to you

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 to me this words meaning Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: "a lot of things".a lot of things
a lot of thing
 the The verb 'meaning' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
are meaning
 strong, energy, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
, super and Did you mean "in other words"?in other words
another words
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 like the sea This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 went there Did you mean "I"?I
i
 can This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 sit down and listening for the waves sounds Did you mean "its" (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?its
it’s
 look like After 'a', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'snog' is correct. If 'snog' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
a snog
 to me

And not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a song it is sounds like a Possible spelling mistake found.powerful
bowerful
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 and sweet song. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 went there Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 fill great. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLet
let
 me talk a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 about the sweet creatures the fishes Possible spelling mistake founddon't
dont
 u This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
Did you mean "they are" or "there are"?they arethere are
the are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 cute?

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much, the fishes have

Gills to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 them breathe in water, and the have scales all over their bodies Possible spelling mistake found.helphealheaphealshe alpheal p
healp
 to safe them from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
, they did not have Possible agreement error – use past participle here: "liked".liked
like
 us Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "a foot" or simply "feet"?a footfeet
a feet
 or Possible spelling mistake found.lieslegslipslogspigsrigs
ligs
 or hands the have tails and fins

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
Help
 them to swim.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 guys I hope Possible spelling mistake found.youyouryousyou u
youu
 have fun with Possible spelling mistake found.memeetmenmeanmeatmet
me♥️