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Animal habitats have been destroyed, and some animal species (e.g tiger and the rhino) have become endangered.

Animal habitats have been destroyed, and some animal species (e. g tiger and the rhino) have become endangered. 2aQoj
Despite the fact that animal’s home have been destroyed by human, not many people notice about what they did harm or harmless to animal. Because of this reason, many species become extinct. Although there are many reasons for this problem, main cause is benefit from destroy habitats are too big that people ready to do ethical things. An evidence of people ruin animals life is logging. Human have many purpose when cut down tree like get timber for sell or agricultural use… However, logging might leads to deforestation and natural habitats maybe loss. Another things human did to hurt animal life is illegal haunting. Many animals like rhino, tiger have been haunted a great quantities and consequences of that is only few species of rare animal still alive and they have to live in protection. Some body tell me that if a problem has many reasons, it will have many solutions. A way to deal with it is educate people about how essential of animals to our life. School should held wildlife conservation for students while goverments shoud fund campaigns about animal. Invest in education will raise people’s awareness. To cope with illegal haunting, goverments have to make harsh punishments and ban coaching. This measure will make hunters have to think carefully before do their job. In conclusion, economic benefit have blinded human’s eye so they ruin animal’s life and solutions to get away with it is invest in education and make rules to punish anyone hurt our friends.
Despite the fact that
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animal’s
home have been
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destroyed
by
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human
, not
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many
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people
notice about what they did harm or harmless to
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animal
.
Because of this
reason,
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many
species become extinct.

Although there are
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many
reasons for this problem, main cause is benefit from
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destroy
habitats are too
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big
that
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people
ready to do ethical things. An evidence of
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people
ruin
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animals
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life
is logging.
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Human
have
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many purpose
when
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cut
down tree like
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get
timber
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for sell
or agricultural
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use
…
However
, logging might leads to deforestation and natural habitats maybe loss. Another things
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human
did to hurt
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animal
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life
is illegal haunting.
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Many
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animals
like rhino, tiger have
been haunted
a great quantities and consequences of
that is
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only
few species of rare
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animal
still
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alive and
they
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have to
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live
in protection.

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Some body
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tell
me that if a problem has
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many
reasons, it will have
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many
solutions. A way to deal with it is educate
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people
about how essential of
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animals
to our
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life
. School should
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held
wildlife conservation for students while
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goverments
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shoud
fund campaigns about
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animal
. Invest in education will raise
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people’s
awareness. To cope with illegal haunting,
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goverments
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have to
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make
harsh punishments and ban coaching. This measure will
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make
hunters
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have to
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think
carefully
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before
do their job.

In conclusion
, economic benefit have blinded
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human’s
eye
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so
they ruin
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animal’s
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life
and solutions to
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get
away with it is
Consider using a past participle here: "invested".
invest
in education and
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make
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rules
to punish anyone hurt our friends.
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IELTS essay Animal habitats have been destroyed, and some animal species (e. g tiger and the rhino) have become endangered.

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