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1. How many people are there in your family? Who are they?

1. How many people are there in your family? Who are they? nEblR

I have a nuclear family which five members: parent, two older sisters, and me. My father is in his early fifties, but his body is still strong and he is also a primary breadwinner. He is a farmer that he usually keeps his nose to the grindstone in his farmland. My mother is a wonderful housewife, all housework is done by her hands. Although she is 50 years old, she is still quite young for her age. My oldest sister is a beautiful state cadre. she is in her late twenties and she just gets married.

I have a nuclear family which five members: parent, two older sisters, and me. My father is in his early fifties, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 his body is still
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).strong, and
strong and
 he is also
 a primary breadwinner. He is a farmer that he usually
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retains
keeps
 his nose to the grindstone in his farmland. My mother is a wonderful housewife, all housework is done
 by her hands. Although she is 50 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
, she is still
 quite young for her age. My oldest sister is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 state cadre. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterShe
she
 is in her late Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).twenties, and
twenties and
 she This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 married. 