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An experience of overcoming fear

An experience of overcoming fear PLxYd
My an experience to overcome to my fear is about travel alone. I hated and scared a plethora of traveling with my self in light of the fact that I thought it is risky and can’t do it. All of my friends said you haven’t grown up and I really upset about that until when I was 24. One day my mother offered to me go to brother’s house in Moscow for two weeks, absolutely I said no because I didn’t want to go anywhere without my parents. My family convinced me and then I accepted. Those two weeks was awesome because of my brother. After one year I went to trip with my friends and until today I have a lot of trips. I have gone abroad twice. I understood not only traveling with my self is not horrible but also it is wonderful.
My an experience to overcome to my fear is about travel alone. I hated and scared a plethora of traveling with my self in light of the fact that I
thought
it is risky and can’t do it. All of my friends said you haven’t grown up and I
really
upset about that until when I was 24. One day my mother offered to me go to brother’s
house
in Moscow for two weeks,
absolutely
I said no
because
I didn’t want to go anywhere without my parents. My family convinced me and then I
accepted
. Those two weeks was awesome
because
of my brother. After one year I went to trip with my friends and until
today
I have
a lot of
trips. I have gone abroad twice. I understood not
only
traveling with my self is not horrible
but
also
it is wonderful.
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IELTS essay An experience of overcoming fear

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