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An American actor said that “Tomorrow is important and precious” . Some people think that individual and society should pay attention to the future than to the present. Do you agree or disagree?

An American actor said that “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think that individual and society should pay attention to the future than to the present. xnYg
It is said that “Tomorrow is important and precious ”. Both, the present as well as future has its own importance. Few are of the opinion that rather than focusing on the present, it is required to put some extra effort to make out upcoming days successful. However, I do not believe this notion. My stance is elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs. The first argument which I would love to put forth is that, most importantly, our present actions decides how our future will be. To elaborate, whatever we are doing now that is result either good or bad depends on our present efforts. For instance, if someone study now better course, then that person will get the best job offer after completion of his academics. In addition to this, rather than focusing on the future live and enjoy the current time is crucial one. This is to say that those who are constantly think about their upcoming goals are less happy and constantly under pressure of this. Therefore, to make future better we can negotiate our present lifestyle. On the other hand, few others have their own claims. To begin with, they said our present will be tomorrow’s past. Thus, it is required to get up and move for the better in the future rather than making our present better. Furthermore, this pessimistic behavior will leads to not only detrimental to individual but also for society. To sum up, although there are few brighter aspect such as secure future, my arguments are convince that presents are more needed one as it is required to maintain and gain the better future our current action will replicate
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important
and precious ”. Both, the
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present
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as well as
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future
has its
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own
importance. Few are of the opinion that
rather
than focusing on the
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present
, it
is required
to put
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some
extra effort to
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make
out upcoming days successful.
However
, I do not believe this notion. My stance
is elaborated
in the ensuing paragraphs.

The
first
argument which I would
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love
to put forth is that, most
importantly
, our
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present
actions decides how our
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future
will be. To elaborate, whatever we are doing
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now
that is
result either
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good
or
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bad
depends on our
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present
efforts.
For instance
, if someone
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study
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now
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better
course, then that person will
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get
the best job offer after completion of his academics.

In addition
to this,
rather
than focusing on the
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future
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live
and enjoy the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
time is crucial one. This is to say that those who are
constantly
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think
about their upcoming goals are less happy and
constantly
under pressure of this.
Therefore
, to
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make
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future
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better
we can negotiate our
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present
lifestyle.

On the other hand
, few others have their
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own
claims. To
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begin
with, they said our
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present
will be tomorrow’s past.
Thus
, it
is required
to
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get
up and
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move
for the
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better
in the
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future
rather
than making our
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present
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better
.
Furthermore
, this pessimistic behavior will
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leads
to not
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only
detrimental to individual
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but
also
for society.

To sum up, although there are few brighter
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aspect
such as secure
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future
, my arguments are
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convince
that
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presents
are more needed one as it
is required
to maintain and gain the
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better
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future
our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
action will replicate
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IELTS essay An American actor said that “Tomorrow is important and precious”. Some people think that individual and society should pay attention to the future than to the present.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
275 words
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