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Amid the Covid-19 Pandemic, students have faced a number of challenges in every aspect. However, AOF’s students have been trying to not only overcome the harsh situation but also perform better in academic lessons. Write a reflection about 300 words on what you have gained from Mr.Alex’s lessons? What is the most important lesson you have learned in this academic year with Mr.Alex? What will you do differently next year in order to achieve better performance?

Amid the Covid-19 Pandemic, students have faced a number of challenges in every aspect. However, AOF’s students have been trying to not only overcome the harsh situation but also perform better in academic lessons. Write a reflection about 300 words on what you have gained from Mr. Alex’s lessons? What is the most important lesson you have learned in this academic year with Mr. Alex? What will you do differently next year in order to achieve better performance? jVkbd
Nowadays, the studying is being difficult which is caused by the Covid-19 pandemic. I am a senior student of AOF so I have learned many subjects such as auditing, accounting, macroeconomics and microeconomics. In this harsh situation, my professeurs of every subject have helped the students to solve their difficulties. Among them, the professor who helps us try to overcome it is Mr. Alex - my favorite teacher. After one seminar, I believe Mr. Alex introduced me to numerous knowledge, not only related to English but he also taught us about social life. Firstly, he has a number of exercises to practise the language’s skill. Therefore I have become more confident in my speaking skill. For example, I can guide a foreign tourist to visit my hometown. Secondly, Mr. Alex also taught us about honesty. He is very tough and he doesn't accept any plagiarism in our homework. He told us not to search on the Internet and use our brain to do it. In my opinion, every lesson plays an important role for me because it makes me better. However, I think the writing skill is the most difficult in the IELTS test and Mr. Alex taught us very carefully about that. He always gives us a complete brainstorming and he always verifies them meticulously after letting us do it ourselves. In addition, his writing format is very necessary for my assignment because it helps me no longer get confused by difficult writing problems. in conclusion, he is always one of my best professor.
Nowadays, the studying is being difficult which
is caused
by the Covid-19 pandemic. I am a senior student of AOF
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I have learned
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many
subjects such as auditing, accounting, macroeconomics and microeconomics. In this harsh situation, my
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professeurs
of every subject have
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helped
the students to solve their difficulties. Among them, the professor who
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helps
us try to overcome it is Mr. Alex
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my favorite teacher.

After one seminar, I believe Mr. Alex introduced me to numerous knowledge, not
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only
related to English
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but
he
also
taught us about social life.
Firstly
, he has a number of exercises to
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practise
the language’s
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Therefore
I have become more confident in my speaking
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skill
.
For example
, I can guide a foreign tourist to visit my hometown.
Secondly
, Mr. Alex
also
taught us about honesty. He is
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very
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tough and
he doesn't accept any plagiarism in our homework. He
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told
us not to search on the Internet and
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use
our brain to do it.

In my opinion, every lesson plays an
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important
role for me
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because
it
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makes
me better.
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, I
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think
the writing
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skill
is the most difficult in the IELTS
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test
and Mr. Alex taught us
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very
carefully
about that. He always gives us a complete
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brainstorming and
he always verifies them
meticulously
after letting us do it ourselves.
In addition
, his writing format is
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very
necessary for my assignment
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because
it
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helps
me no longer
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get
confused by difficult writing problems.

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in
conclusion, he is always one of my best professor.
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IELTS essay Amid the Covid-19 Pandemic, students have faced a number of challenges in every aspect. However, AOF’s students have been trying to not only overcome the harsh situation but also perform better in academic lessons. Write a reflection about 300 words on what you have gained from Mr. Alex’s lessons? What is the most important lesson you have learned in this academic year with Mr. Alex? What will you do differently next year in order to achieve better performance?

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