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Although some think that teachers should be criticized openly by their students during class time, I am strongly disagree with this point of view.

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Although some think that teachers should be criticized openly by their students during class time, I am strongly disagree with this point of view. I will discuss about this issue during the essay and I will offer some other suitable method for ameliorate the education systems. During the last decade educational system in whole world has changed significantly, in most of the countries we cannot see the border that used to be between pupils and their teachers, consequently we can see a student-base class ambience, for example nowadays when it comes to decide about an issue the professor does not say the last word and normally they decide via different polls or questioners, in these democratic classes I think if we start to criticize our teachers it would not be fair, because they are scarifying their time and energy to seek the best ways of teaching methods, so every single teacher try his best to improve the education system. In whole world because of globalization and different interchanges between schools and universities we can see a commonplace ordinary method to improve education system. Now all of the schools follow the same methods that suits the best with pupils, all of the teachers should participate in different webinars and TTC courses to cope with their students and to be up to date and not lag behind of their colleagues, if not they will face lots of problems controlling their students. So I think the best method to handle the classes would be participating in several webinars and TTC courses related to the subject which is taught in schools and universities. In conclusion, while some believes that students can criticize their teachers I think it would not be adequate and some of the several ways to improve education system would be following the up to date methods of teaching via several webinars and TTC courses.
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education
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changed
significantly
, in most of the countries we cannot
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see
the border that
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used
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teachers
,
consequently
we can
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see
a student-base
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class
ambience,
for example
nowadays when it
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comes
to decide about an issue the professor does not say the last word and
normally
they decide via
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different
polls or questioners, in these democratic
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classes
I
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,
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of globalization and
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interchanges between schools and universities we can
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best
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all of the
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teachers
should participate in
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different
webinars and TTC courses to cope with their
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students
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students
.
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to handle the
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would be participating in several webinars and TTC courses related to the subject which
is taught
in schools and universities.

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IELTS essay Although some think that teachers should be criticized openly by their students during class time, I am strongly disagree with this point of view.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
313 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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