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although some people's goal is being richer these days it cause many problems do you agree or disagree

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Universally
 became a richer are few This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 dream in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's era. Which accomplish plethora of problems. I would like to lighten up my point of view run a race to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a luxury lifestyle and always pocket full of money This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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generatymany
 loopholes as preference goes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 job somehow family This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 neglect overtime. I would like to elaborate both the sides of coin.

Beginning with first
 and foremost factor Possible spelling mistake found.maintenance
maintance
 to a lifestyle among society which known to be a trend into peak. Handsome amount from job or business professional fulfill their want to money as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 success to be a rich. For example
, serve conduct a year back manifest almost 96 percent You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 a far and wide try Did you mean "to become"?to become
to became
 a rich. Neatly
, society respect even lay hold of Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 if a person or a family awarded by a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 income level. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Therefore,
Therefore
 which even rose a hope among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to work more being Possible spelling mistake found.exhibitionambition
emibition
 and try to give 100 percent and took a success to touch You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
Possible spelling mistake found.feetmeetsfeesfeedsfeelsfleets
feets
.

On the flip side, headache schedule to earn money may imbalance You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 personal and family life goes You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
. It is not a cup of tea of manage all the aspects. In addition
 to it, person recommendation goes Did you mean the adjective or adverb "overnight" (i.e., for or during the entire night)?overnight
over night
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alot
 of shortcut are apply to fulfill the want which result into transfigure to become Possible spelling mistake. 'offence' is British English.offense
offence
. For instant criminal records depicts that 75 percent This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 involve You use this word too often, consider replacing it withup
over
 criminal activities to become Did you mean the adjective or adverb "overnight" (i.e., for or during the entire night)?overnight
over night
 rich.

To wrap up, working long hours to earn wishes are creditworthy as it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informs
tells
 a person to work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to neglect that Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 inner space goes down frequently
 and inhabitants grasp This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 path. 