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These days, it is clear that significant number of people are suffering from stress when they are at work. Most people say that it caused by city lifestyle. This essay will look into the main causes of stress increasing in the cities and propose some solutions. One of the root causes of the stress is excessive work schedule which can affect to the person in a bad way, because they always go to the work real early and always come back home at night and also, they are not able to spend time with dear ones. By way of illustration, in the Tashkent, most people work 10 or 12 hours per day, which means they can't manage their work-life balance. To tackle this issue, the government should cut extra hours at work and build on more holiday days on special occasions or in national holidays. As a result, this would help reduce the stress level significantly and people can freely pay out their time with family or sleep more hours in the morning. Secondly, although people have lucrative job now, they concern about to misplace their job because of short-term contract which has limited. For instance, in the Western countries, most companies have contract with employees just 1-2 years that it makes jobs more and more insecure. To address this issue, the government should to from new law about long-term job. By doing this, people will be less nervous about their job. All in all, in my point of view, unless people do not think about their health, stress can really affect to the feelings of person and surroundings. Also, it can raise the risk of various diseases. In spite of the fact, people have to pick the better way to be happy at work or with family.
These days, it is
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clear
that significant number of
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people
are suffering from
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stress
when they are at
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work
. Most
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people
say that it caused by city lifestyle. This essay will look into the main causes of
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stress
increasing in the cities and propose
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some
solutions.

One of the root causes of the
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stress
is excessive
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work
schedule which can affect to the person in a
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bad
way,
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because
they always go to the
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work
real early and always
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come
back home at night and
also
, they are not able to spend time with dear ones. By way of illustration, in the Tashkent, most
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people
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work
10 or 12 hours per day, which means they can't manage their work-life balance. To tackle this issue, the
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government
should
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cut
extra hours at
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work
and build on more holiday days on special occasions or in national holidays.
As a result
, this would
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help
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reduce
the
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stress
level
significantly
and
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can
freely
pay out their time with family or sleep more hours in the morning.

Secondly
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have lucrative
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job
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now
, they concern about to misplace their
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job
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because
of short-term contract which has limited.
For instance
, in the Western countries, most
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companies
have contract with employees
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just
1-2 years that it
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makes
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jobs
more and more insecure. To address this issue, the
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government
should to from new law about long-term
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job
. By doing this,
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people
will be less nervous about their job.

All in all, in my point of view, unless
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people
do not
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think
about their health,
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can
really
affect to the feelings of person and surroundings.
Also
, it can raise the
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risk
of various diseases.
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the fact,
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people
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have to
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work
or with family.
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IELTS essay Although. Most people are shdhsjwksnansmw

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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