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Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Renewable energy is widely considered to be an effective alternative to supply electricity demand in cities and their transpiration infrastructures. However, a number of financial and technical issues, such as their high capital cost and intricate design are thought to limit their application to replace fossil fuels. Despite this, I completely agree that sustainable emery will entirely dominate the energy market by replacing conventional energy in the future energy mix. Analyzing the effectiveness of renewable energy sources to provide a reliable energy supply together with their environmental benefits are corroborating evidences to this view that will be demonstrated in this essay.
Renewable
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energy
is
widely
considered to be an effective alternative to supply electricity demand in cities and their transpiration infrastructures.
However
, a number of financial and technical issues, such as their high capital cost and intricate design are
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thought
to limit their application to replace fossil fuels. Despite this, I completely
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agree
that sustainable emery will
entirely
dominate the
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energy
market by replacing conventional
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energy
in the future
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energy
mix. Analyzing the effectiveness of renewable
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energy
sources to provide a reliable
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energy
supply together with their environmental benefits are corroborating evidences to this view that will
be demonstrated
in this essay.
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IELTS essay Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. with this opinion?

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