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All over lhe world, peopre wotch foreign films much more lhon locolly produced films. Why? Should lhe governmenl proyide finonciol supporf to locol film industries?

All over lhe world, peopre wotch foreign films much more lhon locolly produced films. Why? Should lhe governmenl proyide finonciol supporf to locol film industries? raygl
Foreign films such as the Hollywood blockbusters are released all over the world and are enjoyed more than the locally produced films. This essay shall look into the reasons of this phenomenon and also discuss whether the government should provide financial aid to support the local film industry. The popularity of Hollywood films and foreign films in general can be attributed to the fact that they use the most modern technology. For instance, the amazing visual effects and acoustics of the Hollywood movie Avatar won global audiences. What is more, these films are produced by big companies that have the money and the means to generate huge publicity for them. Today, we all know that marketing is what decides the fate of a product - be it a film, a book or a gadget. So it is not surprising that these films tend to do well overseas. ln contrast, the locally produced films are usually produced by small production houses and on top of that they often have familiar storylines that may not interest some people. That probably explains why most people watch foreign films more than locally produced ones. Another significant reason for watching foreign films is that people are curious to know about foreign lifestyles and culture. Today, we do not belong to a big planet Earth; we belong to a small global village. So, people are exposed to different cultures and watching foreign movies satiates their curiosity of knowing about them. Recently, lwatched a Japanese movie, 'okurobito' which means 'Departures' from which I learnt how the Japanese do the last rituals when a person dies. This movie fascinated me a lot and I came to know about Japanese traditions. Some people also watch Hollywood movies to learn English, which has become a global language and watching English movies is a good way to learn English. I firmly believe that the government should invest in the local film industry. To begin with, films are the carrier of a country's culture. Supporting the local film industry will enable to spread its culture and this seems an essential approach to help a country be more powerful in the world. Secondly, the boom of this industry would, to a large extent, produce an increasing number of job positions and consequently, the unemployment rate in this country might substantially decrease, which will contribute to its economy. Recently, our Bollywood movies such as 'Dabang' and 1ab Tak Hai Jaan' have done business worth crores and this has definitely boosted our economy. Summing up, people watch foreign movies because of their better technology and to satisfy their curiosity of foreign culture. The government should definitely promote local film industry for spreading our culture and for boosting the economy.
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Foreign
films such as the Hollywood blockbusters
are released
all over the world and
are enjoyed
more

than the
locally
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produced
films. This essay shall look into the reasons of this phenomenon and
also
discuss

whether the
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government
should provide financial aid to support the
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local
film industry.

The popularity of Hollywood films and
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foreign
films
in general
can
be attributed
to the fact that they
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use


the most modern technology.
For instance
, the amazing visual effects and acoustics of the Hollywood

movie Avatar won global audiences.
What is more
, these films are
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produced
by
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big
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companies
that have

the money and the means to generate huge publicity for them.
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Today
, we all know that marketing is what

decides the fate of a product
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be it a film, a book or a gadget.
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So
it is not surprising that these films tend to

do well overseas.
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contrast, the
locally
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films are
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small
production
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and
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they
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often
have familiar storylines that may not interest
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why most
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people
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watch
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foreign
films more than
locally
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produced
ones.

Another significant reason for watching
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foreign
films is that
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people
are curious to know about foreign

lifestyles and
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culture
.
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Today
, we do not belong to a
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big
planet Earth; we belong to a
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small
global village.
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So
,

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people
are exposed
to
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different
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cultures
and watching
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foreign
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movies
satiates their curiosity of knowing

about them. Recently,
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lwatched
a Japanese
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movie
, '
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okurobito
' which means 'Departures' from which I

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learnt
how the Japanese do the last rituals when a person
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dies
. This
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movie
fascinated me a lot and I came

to know about Japanese traditions.
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Some
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people
also
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watch
Hollywood
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movies
to learn English, which has

become a global language and watching English
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movies
is a
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good
way to learn English.

I
firmly
believe that the
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government
should invest in the
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local
film industry. To
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begin
with, films are the

carrier of a country's
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culture
. Supporting the
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local
film industry will enable to spread its
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culture
and this

seems an essential approach to
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help
a country be more powerful in the world.
Secondly
, the boom of this

industry would, to a large extent, produce an increasing number of job positions and
consequently
, the

unemployment rate in this country might
substantially
decrease, which will contribute to its economy.

Recently, our Bollywood
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movies
such as '
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Dabang
' and 1ab
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Tak
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Hai
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Jaan
' have done business worth crores

and this has definitely boosted our economy.

Summing up,
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people
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watch
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foreign
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movies
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because
of their better technology and to satisfy their curiosity

of
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foreign
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culture
. The
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government
should definitely promote
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local
film industry for spreading our culture

and for boosting the economy.
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IELTS essay All over lhe world, peopre wotch foreign films much more lhon locolly produced films. Why? Should lhe governmenl proyide finonciol supporf to locol film industries?

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