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After graduating from high school, I planned a trip with my best friend to the Suoi Tien amusement park.

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After graduating from high school, I planned a trip with my best friend to the Suoi Tien amusement park. However, it's quite far from our house, so we can only visit and participate in a few activities. First, we spent the morning playing adventure games like speedboats and flying boats. . . Next, at noon, we ate food prepared by our mother at home because the food at this amusement park was very expensive. Finally, we get to see dolphins dancing, a colorful four-season carnival parade. In that parade there were large fruit models such as mango and grapefruit, orange. . . and it was nearly 3 meters high, which impressed me very much. After that trip, I felt that day was wonderful and my favorite thing about that trip was watching the colorful 4-season festival parade of many specialty fruits. I'm looking forward to going back to Suoi Tien amusement park again.

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