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All education primary secondary and further education should be free to all people and paid by the government . Do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Every year, government invest more than estimated price on educational budget of a nation. As education open up the door of growth for an individual. It has been considered as a hot topic of discussion whether improvising learning among the citizen should be free or not. I certainly agree with the concept of free learning. Here, I will be emphasising the crucial point for the support of the statement. At first, would like to point out the fact that most of the population of a republic are below the poverty line. This shows that for the progress of any civilization, the group of weakest citizens should grow. Therefore, it has been determined in many cases that because of poor financial condition, scholars couldn't climb up the stairs to enlarge their intelligence or they had to step back in middle of the race and due to this they couldn't polish up their skills. So, for the development of a nation it is very essential that each and every individual receive fair opportunities. Secondly, the merit of being literate just not limit you till your characteristical growth but also refine the country's enhancement. For instance, it has been examined that broadly successful principality are one with higher education rate. Furthermore, an educated native just not outshine it's community but overall is a boon to the society as they are largely productive. By emphasising the law of free education we can deal with many outrageous problems and hence will motivly develop the quality of life of our respective motherland. An educated individual knows the importance of hygiene which will indirectly prohibit many diseases, hygiene will lead to a pure environment. We can also include the fact that through this we can fewer the amount of crime. Indirectly this will increase the quality of life. Lastly, powerful people create powerful places. And these powerful people need better polished skills which they can implement from a sky high quality of education. For this purpose we do need to have a free and fair academic management. In sum, according to above mentioned analysis, for finer lifestyle a stronger and healthier teaching is required. Therefore, free education should be considered as a prime requirement like food and shelter for advancement of living.
Every year,
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government
invest more than estimated price on educational budget of a nation. As
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education
open up the door of growth for an individual. It has
been considered
as a hot topic of discussion whether improvising learning among the citizen should be
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free
or not. I
certainly
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agree
with the concept of
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free
learning. Here, I will be
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emphasising
the crucial point for the support of the statement.

At
first
, would like to point out the fact that most of the population of a republic are below the poverty line. This
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shows
that for the progress of any civilization, the group of
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weakest
citizens should grow.
Therefore
, it has
been determined
in
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many
cases that
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because
of poor financial condition, scholars couldn't climb up the stairs to enlarge their
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intelligence or
they had to step back in middle of the race and due to this they couldn't polish up their
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skills
.
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So
, for the development of a nation it is
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very
essential that each and every individual receive
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fair
opportunities.

Secondly
, the merit of being literate
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just
not limit you till your
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characteristical
growth
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but
also
refine the country's enhancement.
For instance
, it has
been examined
that
broadly
successful principality are one with higher
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education
rate.

Furthermore
, an educated native
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just
not outshine it's community
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but
overall
is a boon to the society as they are
largely
productive. By
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emphasising
the law of
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free
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education
we can deal with
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many
outrageous problems and
hence
will
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motivly
develop the quality of life of our respective motherland. An educated individual knows the importance of hygiene which will
indirectly
prohibit
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many
diseases, hygiene will lead to a pure environment. We can
also
include the fact that through this we can fewer the amount of crime.
Indirectly
this will increase the quality of life.
Lastly
, powerful
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people
create powerful places. And these powerful
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
need better polished
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skills
which they can implement from a
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
sky high
quality of
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education
. For this purpose we do need to have a
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free
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fair
academic management. In sum, according to above mentioned analysis, for finer lifestyle a stronger and healthier teaching
is required
.
Therefore
,
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free
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education
should
be considered
as a prime requirement like food and shelter for advancement of living.
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IELTS essay All education primary secondary and further education should be free to all people and paid by the government.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
375 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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